Gwendolyn Glover

Gwendolyn Glover
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Westerville, Ohio,
Birthday
June 19
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“Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover.” ~ Mark Twain * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * "Remember, remember, this is now, and now, and now. Live it, feel it, cling to it. I want to become acutely aware of all I’ve taken for granted." ~Sylvia Plath

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FEBRUARY 14, 2010 10:20AM

"Sometimes" (A Poem for My True Love)

Rate: 26 Flag

 

 

sometimes,
i slowly slip into my
mud self
and,
curling up like a potato bug,
i peer out
through my eye slits at a world
too far away to be real. 

sometimes,
i make you too far away
to be real.
and,
like a song in my head,
you slip
in and out of me
and i am here, now. 

sometimes,
i stretch to feel my skin,
to see if it fits
like a glove--
smooth over my muscles,
blood, and bones
and
warm over my heart,
like a mug of hot cocoa
sprinkled with white marshmallows
that melt away. 

sometimes,
i stretch you over my skin,
to see if we fit
together
like a  button and a hole.
and you say something
sweet and sugary like chocolate
and we melt away
like rain that
slides down the windowpane
and into the thirsty dirt. 

 

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Happy Valentine's Day, Babylove!

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This is so wonderful. The first stanza arrests with great images ("mud self," wow!), and the rest delivers even more ("we melt away / like rain . . ."), showing another side of that mud self. Very clever. And very well done.
Too good for any comments. Just wanted to say "Thank you".
R
This is awesome.

Love the first stanza. That's how I feel almost every day LOL
This is full of so many amazing images. You guys are gawgeous! oh-so-rated!
Excellent. Happy Valentine's Day! Much love to you and your valentine
Busy, Busy, Busy, is what we Bokononists say.
not surprising, this is one of the best valentine poems of OS this year. brava, gwen. it's gorgeous.
Sweet(tooth) thoughts, lucky man. Hope you both have a great V-Day.
This is so good. So beautiful and so good. Congratulations, and Happy Valentine's Day!!!
Thanks for including your beautiful photograph.
Fine writing, rated.
This is just amazing...Happy Valentine's Day to you and your Babylove! xox
Lovely, just lovely. Your words sing as each image dances across the page. I love every stanza, from the 'mud self' to the sugary chocolate words of your sweetie. Thanks for this Valentines treat. Hope you and David have a fun, mushy, romantic day.
Gwendolyn!

This is gorgeous, words are failing me. It is utterly charming. Thank you for letting me peek into your beautiful world. Love to you!
I really like the repetition of "dirt" and "mud", the organic stuff of life, the end result of decay from which new life springs.
I want that too.

You two are a fabulous couple--great photo!
Happy Valentines Day!
xoxoxo,
An excellent poem. Almost as good as the picture. (those tattoos are so cool(
So beautiful. The first paragraph is my favorite:

sometimes,
i slowly slip into my
mud self
and,
curling up like a potato bug,
i peer out
through my eye slits at a world
too far away to be real.
Sweet. Happy ♥ Day!
This is soooo good, Gwen.

This is the part that speaks most strongly to me:

"sometimes,/i make you too far away/to be real."

Thank you for posting this.
Beautiful, so romantic. Happy Valentine's Day!
Rated.
Thank you, guys!!! I hope you all had a lovely valentine's day!

I won't be on OS much this week because my computer at work is relocating to a new area and I don't know when I'll have it back.

Love you, guys!
Gwen, this is beautiful and playful and heartfelt. I hope you and David had a fabulous St. Valentine's Day.
utterly charming. rated.