hatchetface

hatchetface
Location
Rochester, New York, United States
Birthday
September 15
Bio
Artist and teacher posing as a scientist.

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JUNE 14, 2009 9:34PM

The Garden at Twilight

Rate: 5 Flag

The robin’s song is different now

It’s not the same one he sang this morning

The notes are the same, it’s the tempo that’s changed 

This is a slower, more deliberate song

Sung with care and purpose

 

Last year's collards, buried alive, have persisted and grown tall

Too tough even for that winter to have killed

New seeds are ready to drop 

 

The sky through the trees takes on a color I know but have never seen

Is this what my grandparents saw when they stared into the distance at the end of the day?

 

Memories and ideas are fireflies briefly lighting a dark tangle 

The way from here lit just as brightly 

A slow, deliberate song persisting as I turn in for the night

 

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Each time you post a new poem, it shows a new maturity in your writing. I'm so happy that you're writing. Damn, you're getting amazing.
Thanks L. I have some catching up to do, having been a "poet" for six months. I also have some editing to do and miles to go before I sleep etc...
great poem, having been awakened by the dozens of birds our yard attracts all having their say at once somewhere around five thirty this morning I think that I prefer their evening song.
You describe your (and our) connectedness to all things, birds and sky and ancestors, so well that I think you plucked the thoughts from my head.
I like this one especially, hf, because it akin to the observations I was making last evening during what must have been the best evening for clouds and sunset I've seen in my area in recent memory. I'll be posting the pics later today. Ditto COS sentiments; rated for connectedness.
I'm glad you all liked this, even if you think it's about birds and plants and fireflies, which it isn't.