Hells Bells

Hells Bells
Location
Heart of the Heart of the Country
Birthday
February 01
Bio
Book editor, parent, MFA in poetry from a land far, far, away--and a long, long time ago . . . I'm not a psychologist, but I play one on TV.

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APRIL 10, 2009 1:43PM

Space Within

Rate: 15 Flag

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Windowed, white and shuttered, on a street
with other houses, mowers’ distant drone,
sharp smell of cut grass, and the feel of home.
Or city walk-up, stopping, out of breath,
bags heavy with our plans for sharing food,
There’s safety as the sirens wind away.
Squeezed in a cot or backseat of a car
side by side with others’ fitful turning,
together breathing—when? Tomorrow. Soon.
Tin or cardboard, walls keep outside out,
and, blanket pulled aside, there’s space within
for holding all that's precious we still own.
 

                Thanks to Annette2009 for the opportunity. 

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Moving and evocative and beautifully crafted. Rated and loved.
I love reading poetry... I can't write it as well as you do. Your imagery is intoxicating. (Perhaps you'd be interested in joining a writer's co-op that's forming? PM me if you like) --rated--
This poem completely changed meaning for me half way through. I had to adjust my perception of who you were writing about. I love poems that keep me guessing, but aren't so out of reach I'll never get there. Thanks for sharing.
mysterious and captivating.
Wonderful crafting with words.
...but for the grace. Thank you and rated.
I'm so excited that poetry is being written and read here! Let's keep on keepin' on . . .
Now this is good poetry.
"together breathing"...I love the vision of that.
Very nice!! I so admire poets as I always thought poetry a most difficult thing to even attempt....
the first two sentences are brilliant