Hells Bells

Hells Bells
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Book editor, parent, MFA in poetry from a land far, far, away--and a long, long time ago . . . I'm not a psychologist, but I play one on TV.

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MAY 5, 2009 4:33PM

Loving the Unpoetical Midwest, Especially Now (poem)

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            That part of the country is, within itself,

            as unpoetical as any spot of the earth;

            but seeing it .  . . aroused feelings in me

            which were certainly poetry.

 

                                                --Abraham Lincoln

 

I.

That Lincoln practiced law not far from here

is a fact. You can visit the courthouse

where he stopped, even buy a postcard

in a dingy gift shop where, in tatters,

the same red-checked curtains hang

as they've hung for years.

 

   Lincoln

II.

As a kid I rode my Schwinn Typhoon for miles,

making up stories in my head.

For the record, the Schwinn was black,

had playing cards clothespinned to its spokes

--so as to produce a fine, wicked chatter--

two rear baskets, and a horn that never worked.

But for years it was my good pony,

my palomino beauty. For miles I held the reins

of plastic handgrip--plastic streamers, mane.

 

corn

III.

Around here it is flat.

Some say, on a day without haze,

you can see all the way to Thomasboro,

all the way to the grain elevator

rising from plowed fields.

And on the clearest of these days

the long horizon line describes an arc,

becoming the curve of the earth.

New corn resolves itself into green ocean.

 

By all that's true, I am this country's fool,

for I too have heard the gulls scream overhead,

smelled salt air, and seen the solitary lighthouse

at Thomasboro rising from spring fields--

cylindrical, and cool, and real.

 

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This poem includes Abraham Lincoln, a Schwinn Typhoon, a cornfield, a grain elevator, and sea gulls. Something for everyone!?
This spoke to me on many levels, Hells Bells. "But for years it was my good pony, / my palomino beauty." And I can't explain this, but I could taste part III - the salt air perhaps. Beautiful.
Beautiful, HB. I think the human spirit longs, ultimately, for an unbroken horizon, something that can best be found in our Midwest or on the coast when staring out to sea.

You're blessed to be there. One question, though. I'm not sure I understand the lighthouse and seagulls by the cornfields. Poetic license or a literal sighting?
I love this. It reminds me of a poem Karl Shapiro wrote about Nebraska, that had a few of these lines in it,

Where travelers from California bitch at the backwardness and New Yorkers step on the gas in a panic...

I love Nowhere where the human brag is a brag of neither time nor place, / But an elephant house of Smithsonian bones and the white cathedrals of grain, / The feeding-lots in the snow with the steers huddled in symmetrical misery, backs to the sleet, / To beef us up in the Beef State plains, something to look at.

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I love that poem.
RC--I turned the cornfield into an ocean, Pt. III, line 9, so I figured why not lighthouse? Why not seagulls? Hope my license isn't revoked . . .
HB, the horizon line becoming the curve of the earth... the green resolving into the ocean - what an arresting image! I stared and stared at the picture just imagining the sight of the faraway ocean.

And oh how I could picture you on that bike, pedaling furiously, playing cards clicking! The detail about the cards and the clothespins - just that by itself captures a sense of your home and town.

Wonderful, wonderful work; I loved it.
HB,
Not only not revoked but doubled, if such a thing can be done. So evocative!
doloresflores: I'm a fan of Karl Shapiro's, too: the everyday idiom, plain speech . . . unpoetical made poetical.
Love it!
And my bike was my mustang when I was growing up...
Hells- My family settled the area around Monticello and Farmer City and Mansfield so maybe we are swimming in nearby waters. I have always loved the white towers of grain elevators in the distance or to sit outside on a summer night and see their blink blink blinking in the distance. And the trips south from Pontiac to see my Grandmother and aunts and uncles ,Colfax, Anchor (there's one for your ocean theme) Saybrook, Bellflower, Mansfield, Mahomet, Champaign and when I came back from living in Miami I drove that route in reverse and got lost because so many of my landmarks were torn down. Is it right at Fischer or straight through? My U-haul was a modern day prairie schooner in need of a light house. Great poem. I guess I am this country's fool also.
Sometimes you need a good imagination to live in the midwest.
HB - stopped back in to enjoy again - and I'm thinking that more people need to read poetry! How can we work on this?
HB - stopped back in to enjoy again - and I'm thinking that more people need to read poetry! How can we work on this?
Abe Lincoln was definitely of the Midwest, and to my mind, he was the most poetic of all our Presidents, so I guess that means he put his own statement to the lie. As a Michigander born and raised, and a poet -- thought of little note -- I call him on it, too. Having spent my life as a playing card, a joker flapping against the spinning spokes of commonplace expectations, I call him on it once more.
Wonderful :) and I love the fine wicked chatter of a card on bike spokes ... perfect!
People are always claiming land, but perhaps it is just the opposite...maybe the land claims us?
" But for years it was my good pony,"
"New corn resolves itself into green ocean."

Hells, simply perfect. This is the "good stuff."
I do find a lot of beauty in the Midwest. When my friend from Iowa got married on her parents' dairy farm, I made her a little joking photo album (mostly boring pictures but irreverent commentary), but in the back I included Iowa's catchphrase: "Iowa you make me smile." When I showed coworkers in Maryland, one of them was like, "What?!? OK..." and sarcastically commented on Iowa's slogan. I was not happy.
i think all geography comes with its own style of poetry
Well done. If you're there it can't be that unpoetical.

I grew up in the middle of Missouri, and our local paper had a reporter/poet/columnist on staff. She wore lots of rouge and hats with nets. She wrote a poem about the French poodle a juvenile delinquent boyfriend gave to my sister.
Lovely imagery. Dropped in by chance. Will come back.
Admired schinn typhoon much. Read some of the books written by him. Anyway, this poem is really one of a kind. Wanna write my own one but such a difficult thing to do. Loved the poem when i was a seven-year old kid. I thought i shall never heard a poem as lovely as tree...LOL!