Hells Bells

Hells Bells
Location
Heart of the Heart of the Country
Birthday
February 01
Bio
Book editor, parent, MFA in poetry from a land far, far, away--and a long, long time ago.

NOVEMBER 7, 2009 5:25PM

Villanelle (with Bird Call!)

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THE VIREO 

It is a puzzle how we happen here,

wrapped in a single blanket, talking low

until at last the morning light appears

 

uncurtained through the dirty window's blur.

Now all the talking's done and we both know.

It is a puzzle how we happened here.

 

The empty bottle, upright on the floor

begins to cast an amber, reaching shadow 

now at last the morning light appears

 

and streaming sunlight winds the bird we hear

 --its rising, falling song--the vireo:

It is a puzzle how we happen here.

 

Inquiring bird, its questions seem so near

and clockwork answers, measured wisdom, follow:

After darkness, morning light appears.

 

The liquid song climbs high, then tumbles low.

We asked some questions--what more can we know?

It is a puzzle how we happen here,

until at last the morning light appears.

 

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A little of this bird video goes a long way, but, well . . . you get the idea.
Gorgeous. Thanks for this. I love villanelles.
Said villanelle creates such soothing visions to which I'm not immune. ~R~
Just beautiful--the poem and the video! I love that so many of us are picking up the villanelle today!
Poems good. Next week, sestina madness!
Until the last morning light appears... lovely way to start any day.
Beautiful. Lyrical.
Man, I'm seeing villanelles everywhere now, and here I thought if I posted one this morning for the weekend it would be pretty obscure and fall flat. Glad to see everyone else posting them.
I think the bird is doing a villanelle too! Love it.
HB, you slay me yet again with excellent images . . .
it's a puzzle how w happen here/til the morning light appears...


a new morning, a new birth, every morning.
Meausured wisdom most accesible in these dawn hours.

Wisdom of:rebirth. You have been gone all night, in other realms,
private ones...to realize that what has been accomplished

in the night lends textures and richness

to the rebirth.
Beautifully rendered. Now I'm going deeper into your blogs to read more!
third time trying to leave a comment (oh, thank you, great os god):

this is beautifully rendered. i've read some of your other poems (loved the accidental poetry of alzheimers), and now into your other posts.

big r
Yes. The sunshines. Morning is broken.
If there was one past "headache" excuse:`
"Im not in the mood. You stink as usual."

"No." being said more than 10,000 eons!
None of us mortals would be reading you!
It is a simple - imagine it? One 'no' excuse!

Life is a miracle. Life simply unfurls. Yes!
Thanks for helping discover phenomena!
Sibling. Amaze our amazement. We here!

Happy days. I gotta get down the old road.
I Hope a path thoroughfare take me there.
Ya make us wonder and say:`Wow whoas.
I thank you all for stopping by and reading my poem! Poems are good, and both reading and writing them can get a person a little closer to the divine.
Fourth try:

Ms. Bells, I truly thought this was inspired writing. OS kept me from telling you so last night 3 times. I smell conspiracy lurking.....

Will be digging deeper into your back catalog.

R
okay, truly I am not stalking you. My earlier comments did not appear last night, but -- VOILA! -- now they are there. You must think I'm either insane or went over the edge with the bird video.

safely creeping back to my blog now....
This bird seems so purposeful. Beautiful poem; reminder to slow down. Next week sestina madness - look forward to it!
Beautiful bird; wise poet; lovely villanelle.