Hells Bells

Hells Bells
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Book editor, parent, MFA in poetry from a land far, far, away--and a long, long time ago . . . I'm not a psychologist, but I play one on TV.

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MARCH 7, 2010 7:24PM

The Passage (Sestina)

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Away from camp, you bend beside the lake,

touch glassy bubbles, water rushing in circles

so cold they want to keep your hand. Alone,

you watch the sun rise in the glacial cirque, moon

white, still up in the west, steep rock

face all around. You stop to catch your breath.

 

Walking back, you think of your breath

coming in puffs, see a deer's skull by the lake

resting on a shelf of lichens, monochromes on rock,

The papery nasal structures under twin circles

of eye socket, blank and white as the moon.

Skeleton gone, the skull by the lake is alone.

 

Back at camp and busy, no longer alone,

You rig the food up in a pack, tie ropes, breath

coming fast now from the work, and hoist it moon-

ward. At night bears drink from this lake,

their claws in soft mud tracking circles,

patterns ending abruptly on rock.

 

Night comes and wind whistles through rock.

Curled in your sleeping bag, you are alone

with the wakeful tent flap, thoughts circling:

       If heart stops here, the rise and fall of breath

      halts, will flesh be taken by the freezing lake?

      Will soul become one with the moon?

In a sky filled with serious stars, the moon

does not speak, nor do steep rock

cliffs answer. Here only the shivering lake

seems to think, that reflection alone

where  bears gather to drink, their breath

ringing the clear quartz surface with circles.

 

You climb higher, to the place a hawk circles

and trees thin out. There is no moon

at the summit, only the dazzling tarn and breath

coming, an accurate pain. Scratched on rock,

the passageway back plunges down. Alone

at the base, your tent is a speck by the lake.

 

Alone, you witness the jawbone of rock,

Moon rising and falling like breath.

Fear circles far below you, by the lake.

 

 

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It took me years to get this far along, and I'm STILL writing this poem.
I laughed aloud. Still writing. I get that. All of mine are still being written. I've enjoyed your challenge and this Sestina.
It will take me at least three lifetimes write as well you. Now I'm going listen to wind whistling through rock.
Well, here you've killed two birds with one stone. The Sestina and the fear Open Call. I'm feeling a real connection with you here HB.
This was beautiful. I always wonder how many people have a file full of stuff to pull from that is always being worked on?
It's like the twisty little maze of passages in the old Internet Adventure game -- lost without a map. Nice work. Your images are wonderful.
Those are b-b-b-b-bear tracks???? I, an acrophobe, feinted from fear at the penultimate stanza. I didn't scan this, it just entered my brain thru my nostrils. It's STILL IN THERE!!!!! (r)
You rock. I'm probably going to have bear dreams tonight.
Of course, the Bear is powerful. Like this.
If you were brutally honest you'd have written "at night bears tear open our garbage cans, seeking Yoplait yogurt containers."

rated anyway
It is worth the years - the poem is gorgeous, stirring. I have to admit that I didn't know what a sestina was - somehow missed that day in Lit Crit. But your poem drew me in enough that I had to look up the definition and appreciate the repetition of those ending words.
that is a wonderful poem.