Hells Bells

Hells Bells
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Book editor, parent, MFA in poetry from a land far, far, away--and a long, long time ago . . . I'm not a psychologist, but I play one on TV.

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JULY 9, 2010 12:20PM

Self-Portrait with Fox, Crow, and Fish

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A woman in the road wails, "Help me!"
She carries a bundle of straw, has carried it far
without so much as a sip of water or a crust.

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From the woods, Fox hears her cry:
"Tie up half the bundle with your rope.
I'm a fast runner and can carry it in my teeth."

But the woman says no:

"Thank you for offering,
but, as you know, in all the stories
the fox is an unreliable animal.
Of course that's not necessarily you,
but I can't take any chances."

crow

She staggers on, whimpering,
"I am alone, all alone."

Crow sees her and says:
"For me, it is easy.
I'll take as much of your bundle
as my beak will hold
and fly with it over the fields."

 The woman says thanks but no thanks:

"Even if flying were safe, which it isn't,
I see how you turn your head
to look sideways with your one shiny eye.
That could be trouble, looking while flying.
If the straw fell, that's it--lost forever."

 

  
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More miles, and the woman moans,
"Who is listening? Who will take
just one straw from my back?"

From the lake, Fish replies:
"I'm the best swimmer in the river.
Give me a straw and I will swim
with it to the other side."

The woman pauses, then says:

"I know it's just one, but even one can be hard.
What if you found it too tiring
and began to resent my demand?
Also, water ruins straw,
and each straw is important to me." 

The woman trudges on, carrying the bundle.

Fox slinks through the forest.
Crow flies high overhead.
Fish disappears in a flash of silver.

The bundle bends the woman,
bends her, like the willow, in two. 

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Go forth, shining example that self-knowledge is not enough.
Wow, HB, this is powerful. She wants help...yet....Lot to think about here. A parable, no less - love it.
Perhaps the woman might deliver her complaints to a higher class of animals?
Yep, that's you all right.
Wow. The ending is unexpected. The parable does not reveal itself until the penultimate line. Very nice.
You--excuse me, the woman--needs an elephant. One like Horton. They're faithful, 100%. Of course, the willow has its beauty, too.

I like the telling: spare, archetypally aware (sort of a meta-folk story), and, given tags, self-aware. Perhaps another title could be "Why Socrates Was Wrong." I like, too, that she piled it on with the fish--as she grew more despondent, she needed to come up with more reasons to object.

Nice fable. I do think she was mistaken with the crow, however. Looking while flying seems like an awfully good idea to me . . .
Self-inflicted martyrdom--I know it well.

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And you wonder why I'm not married anymore.
This is amazing...lots to think about. I'm a professional helper, so I relate.
Also, you formatted this just perfectly!
Formatting is important in my (figurative) book. My work colleague taught me some very rudimentary !
HB, this is really, really excellent. A bit of fable covering a whole ball of truth. And your command in your 1st comment . . . yes, well, a ball of truth in that for me, too.
Thanks for visiting, visitors. I put "HTML" in brackets in my comment above, and it disappeared! It's a miracle!
Wow. I'm speechless. (Ultimate compliment).
today i saw the most majestic willow tree; i did not break. how lovely the freedom.
As desperate as it all seems, it IS a willow tree.
Not asking for help is weakness enough, not accepting help is insanity!
Who among us is truly independent? None! It is interdependence, recognizing each others gifts that keep us safe....loving your fable/allegory. Rated.
I am struck by the combination to 'types' you used in the piece. Not what one would usually expect to see...perhaps that is another message in itself: help is not always where nor in the form you might expect it. Nice Work!
Very Zen. Many who seek help are afraid to accept it when/if if is offered in a way that is different than what they expect, hope for or demand. Beautifully crafted.
We have to leave all options available to us. (I figured that one out recently.) Well done, as usual.
Oh boy, self-knowledge. Sometimes we know too much of the wrong stuff. I liked this. Did you intend the parable as an ironic reflection of "The Giving Tree," a story that has always made me uncomfortable? Rated.
I had Aesop's fables more in mind as a model, Martha, but I will say, that story always creeped me out . . .
(i) Yes, I recognize that woman! But I don't think you wrote it about me! (i)
I love fables. Thanks for adding a good one to the number
Do more of these! I like this kind of thing. It's therapeutic to read. It's child-like but not at the same time.
noticed this one when posted--perhaps subconciously shied away due to the superficiallity of your stage name tho now I see how the incongruity, and paradox, 'works' almost as well as this sentence, which, at a glance, contains too many words ending in y. Once upon a time,
It's hard to write a modern fable. You do well.