Hells Bells

Hells Bells
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Book editor, parent, MFA in poetry from a land far, far, away--and a long, long time ago . . . I'm not a psychologist, but I play one on TV.

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OCTOBER 8, 2010 12:26PM

Lines Written in Salina, Kansas (Poem)

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Traveling west to east or east to west,
it doesn't matter, I might have guessed 

this recollection of opposite travel,
row upon row of trees that unravel 

in the same dull direction as road.
What to think of--nothing. I suppose 

the going matters, not the way to go.
The whistling wind-wing and the radio's 

static, fading tunes keep company.
So never mind--to think is treachery.  

Put miles behind us, let's push on somewhere
neither east nor west, but simply there. 

We'll stop the car, get out, and have some lunch
(boiled ham on white, no mayo), gas her up 

and check the oil. Then, in a dark stall,
roll of towels sprung loose or none at all

--dim lightbulb, disinfectant, sad ablution--
we'll find ourselves engaged in repetition, 

see the sprawling thoughts, few words that matter,
ideas we scrawl and gouge, then freely scatter

the same from west to east and east to west:
Here is our need recited, name undressed.

 

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For you youngsters, the "wind-wing" on a car was on the front window and tilted back so you could get some breeze . . .
There are so many lines that I love--the rhythm of the road trip is so true in these couplets.
I write in my pickup truck more than anywhere. It's truck cab graffiti scribble.
I sometimes get tempted to write on bathroom doors in BP gas restrooms.
No nap @ BP.
Bees piss on seat.
I am gonna write to sent the money that crooks waste to people like You, Philanthropist.
You should write too.
Write your cell number.
Ask wealthy for money.
Write your jail cell #.
Ask crooks to email.
Send financial Help.
Ask honest folk to send you gas money, and hire a lazy-helper to ride the open highway.
You'd bee fun in B&B?
B&B's are the best bed.
I hope I no nap with bug.
Stink Bugs are everywhere.
Buy Truck Stink Bug Spray.
Ya got my thoughts `Goofy.
Behave.
Ring bells.
No leave stuff.
I found a towel,
skirt, and blouse?
It may be Yours?
Ya left @ B&B?
I send @ COD.
No forget key.
No lose head.
No blog today
Ask for gas doe.
O Philanthropist.
I hear Heaven Bell.
It may be katydids.
O Nighttime music.
Shush. okay. wow.
i'm all too familiar with wind wings and boiled ham and gas station bathrooms. spent some happy summer weekends long long ago in salina. what a small world. what a breathtaking poem.
Wish I still had wind wings.

Too few serious poets write rhyming poetry these days. This is just lovely.
Zowie. I might like this as much as the AV poem, which I love.
I thank you all. I always wonder whether posting poetry will make people leave me in droves.
wow! I so admire people who can write poetry. I'm terrible at it. You really conjure up this journey for the reader.
That's driving through Kansas, all right.

That last line--very Yeats-like.

A proper road trip, warts and all,
would include that bathroom stall.

r+
Been there - done that. Oh the "wind wing", yes I'd forgotten. Wonderful poetry HB
fading tunes do make for the best company... enjoyed the trip.
I always wondered what the "wind wing" was called - I've seen them, used them, but never had a name for them. This is a wonderful poem . . . makes me miss the open road . . .
I think it must be the boiled ham that's bringing people here . . .
Hells, I'm from Wichita.
I don't like boiled ham...
This, however...so glad I followed another commenter.
Thank you.
Thank you for sharing this heartfelt and moving poem.