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Ina Schroders-Zeeders

Ina Schroders-Zeeders
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Terschelling West, The Netherlands
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January 04
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Freelance Dutch writer. (fiction) Married, 3 sons Living on an island in the North of the Netherlands. Book in English: "Veritas" 160 poems http://www.amazon.com/Veritas-Ina-Schroders-Zeeders/dp/0983676461/ref=sr_1_15?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1331059645&sr=1-15

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MARCH 8, 2011 2:01PM

Don't go silently away

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Don’t go silently away

Please let me know

in advance

that it’is  time to silently say

that you go

But promise to be back one day

if you have the chance

 

Silently go when it’s time for our eyes

after they’ve said all their soundless goodbyes

Silently go but

don’t silently leave

before saying to me

that you’d much rather stay

 

Tell it  to me with your eyes

as I know they will  tell me no lies

and it is them I can truely believe

when you leave

silently

 

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I slip away...it's my nature not to stay too long. You're right in saying "tell it to me with your eyes".

I do...then vaporize.
In the seventies I met the kindest young woman.
I stayed around Oslo, Norway, Tivoli Gardens.
I was introduced to Hand Christian Anderson.
We walked. Talked. I recall the black mermaid.
It's down the Canal Path. You Remember too?
I didn't wish her to feel my war's sad grief pain.
Her hospitality was true, sincere, and so lovely.

Opera
Music
Health

I wondered off to protect.
You make me recall taint.
It was my 'taint' of a war.
I wished to not let her to`
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Know and feel my depth.
Know means to penetrate.
Know is to enter deeply.

A depth of sad war grief.
I loved the water fiords.
We travelled to Bodda.
(spelling)
It was past the Moon.
We saw the midnight.
We spoke very softly.

It was one feast time.
Feast of Midnight Sun.
The Sun never did sets.

In space there is sound?
In a dessert. Wonderful.
There is silence. O Recall.
We traveled by chew train.
Wonderful memories. sigh

Whoever She was I left. The war haunted me.
We ate. We looked out from a high apartment.
I am always melancholy when I recall her eyes.
typo
Not Hand but Hans
You can delete two
A gadget gets slow.
Lovely, and convincingly said.
I love Art's comments.

I love Art's comments.

I love Art's comments.
Hi Blinddream, and gone you are... :)
Thank you so much 3 times Art, you are a real champion of comments! Wow! I will figure out how to edit the text of a comment and make a Hans out of hand, deleted the 2 extra comments :)
Thank you Leon!