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Ina Schroders-Zeeders

Ina Schroders-Zeeders
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Terschelling West, The Netherlands
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January 04
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Freelance Dutch writer. (fiction) Married, 3 sons Living on an island in the North of the Netherlands. Book in English: "Veritas" 160 poems http://www.amazon.com/Veritas-Ina-Schroders-Zeeders/dp/0983676461/ref=sr_1_15?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1331059645&sr=1-15

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JULY 29, 2011 3:13PM

The tradesman

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You prayed so hard while we made love

but love did not came from above,

it is a trade, in bed it’s made

as far as you cared anyway then.

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The moves, the moaning and the end

an arcade of some bodies bent

a violent action following erection.

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To you that was what made the trade.

You came and thought that love was made,

you called it:  heavens satisfaction.

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Your  love was not sent from above

as you would throw me down to earth

and made this trade an act of dirt.

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How could you call this making love

when you wanted to pay me off

the truth was more than you could bear

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You left in tears and went somewhere

you had enough, I didn’t follow.

The trade of making love is just an art of sorrow.

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glad the sob left in tears.
not from above, the love?
ah from below.
finance then finds a way in.
Maybe a skilled artisan. Attention to detail. Listen. &c.
"and made this trade an act of dirt."
You said it well. I've laid in that dirt.