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Idiot Savant
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I'd like to write something new and fun. But I'm drawing a blank. How do you draw a blank? Is it the simplistic beauty of the blank page?

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JANUARY 3, 2011 9:20PM

Memories Before Memories

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He opened the door and there she was, soaking wet and shivering.

"Sorry I've been avoiding you Winnie the Pooh"

Rain dripping off her nose.

"I'm here for the memory."

"Is this what you want?"

"Yes Pooh. There's no chance for us, other than the memory."

"I know. That's why I never did anything all the times..."

"I know. But I'm cold and wet, over 18 and here."

Warm and dry, the bed familiar and welcoming.

They clung to each other like people in need of shelter.

As they became one, she whispered in his ear "You're too old Pooh."

"You're too young."

"We're already only a memory...I know you love me."

They filled a void in their lives for a moment.

He let her create the memory, warm and nurturing. It was hers to create, theirs to remember.

"We'll always be friends."

"Liar."

"I thought it was something I should say to the person I'm making love to. It's not true."

"Christopher Robin outgrew Pooh."

"I know, that's why this was a memory before we started. It's why I avoided you."

He woke-up alone, remembering holding her long into the night.

They saw each other often after they created the memory, exchanging only glances, smiles and meaningless chat.

Christopher Robin was gone.

But the memory lingers...

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Memories are so often better than the reality -- that's what keeps us coming back...
"this was a memory before we started"

I can relate.
It's true sometimes we do things just the have the memory of doing it. I don't remember who said that, but the memory of hearing it lingers on.
R
I love that flick... Would you say it's an accurate portrayal of man?
It's an accurate portrayal of that character.

Man, well, we're not built to take on millions of lives and feelings. When movies become to "big" we don't feel as connected emotionally as we do to a single person or life.