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FEBRUARY 18, 2012 7:34PM

There Is A Devil In The Seas

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white whale 

 

 

There’s a devil in the seas.

          Sure as there is a God of the seven seas, there is a devil!

He skirts the lands and the seas in evil-inspired journeys,

                    the blend of mass and muscle and rage a built up force. 

 

Upon spotting a sailing ship,

     he flings himself full tilt at the floating target,

          soon to be a story told in debris. 

 

 

On this day, the story is told off Guam;

     where pirates play a sea-like version of cops and robbers.

Guns drawn against the masts of others ships;

          flags playing up and down the masts in deceptive salutes. 

 

The sea-devil spots the bobbing soap of the tub,

     and so fast does he move that foam builds up before his mouth,

          and whale devil eyes bead to the doomed ship,

               with teeth toothpick ready and sharp. 

 

          Such great speed builds,

a 3.5 ton bullet trained upon the unsuspecting;

     water tearing around the frame and swirling in chaos behind,

                as speed and momentum build to climatic movement. 

 

At a meer 20 yards from the ship,

     the water breaks as the seas devil crests the surface;

and pushes up…up…an anti-gravitic lunge into the blue sky above…

               higher and higher yet. 

 

So great the noise and roar that deafens the waves strewn seas,

     as pirates look back and then up in ghost-terror;

and a shadow of doom jumps between the full bright sun,

         and the ship about to be decimated and torn asunder. 

 

Then, at the apex, the great white sea devil bellows out his rage,

                and flattens his frame to parallel with the seas…

  and in a gravity defying moment, hangs there directly above the ship;

potential hell now realized.  

 

There is no escape!

                          Where do men run when on a ship?

     Where do they swim when the beast is so huge? 

 

                    All aboard become the maelstrom of chaotic destruction,

               caught in the down flow of the bullet diving to the deeps….

          pulled to Davey Jones locker dead or alive for the second,

     dead for sure in the minute. 

 

But the devil circles back,

          jumping again and again on those poor souls floating on a plank.

till his wrath is consumed for the moment,

                         and his world-wide quest for death continues.

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What a powerful poem, I never realized this was happening.
rated with love
Hi RP!!!
Call it poetic license! : )
Political metaphor? Or maybe that is my imagination....
My Navy son is at sea right now in an unknown area I hope your sea monster keeps him safe from danger...
Sheila....I have to admit no...not intended as political...but that is the great thing about poetry...we can all see different things.
Very powerful. Makes me think of Moby Dick.
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LL : I will make sure he does!!!

hilarad : Thank you very much!
Loved it, JD. Where do we swim when the beast is so huge? The devil seems to exist at those desperate times.
Oooh, I love good angry and smart poetry.
Great job. Glad to see you posting.
Very powerful and thrusting into my mind. Moby Dick the musical is playing in my city. The set sounds amazing.
Anything beneath the surface is good for me. Thanks for the journey, which compels your vision, the true urgings. Do keep bringing us more. Like the images that felt tearing at my sea legs -- or, the memory of sea legs, there taut at the muscles below the knee. How we keep up in these weighing, cantankerous sea. There ready to swallow us, our next to last moment.
I love when you swim with the words, JD!
Just wow! I felt like I was stranded at sea myself. Must be my weekend. I had to read a book about sharks and the big hungry octopus. Now you come along with a menacing whale. I won't be taking a cruise anytime soon.
Ferns : Anger...but I was in the "stuff happens no matter what mood" when I wrote it long ago.

zanelle : Definately Moby Dick inspired. Thanks!
JD, your avitar is throwing me off. I don't associate it with you. Glad I found you. Great piece.
I get a little sea sick, however, I hung on for dear life while reading with pleasure.
A powerful piece of writing. Thanks.
inthisdeepcalm : Thanks for checking this out..and the encouragment.

mhold : Was that a pun??? :)

Fay : ""Cruisin'....o n a sunny afternoonnnn....oo....onnnn" : )

tril : Sorry bout that. Will you adjust ...or should I?

CF : Rocking the waters makes me green.....uhb...
John : Thanks.... : )
You draw vivid pictures with your words.