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JeepCraze
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Everytown, USA
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March 26
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I'm a roaming gypsy too busy trying to be in five places at once. Take a number and you'll be called shortly.

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MARCH 3, 2010 12:31AM

Five Open Words I Want To Express To You

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I really like the “Open Call” concept. This one is a call out for poetry that uses five particular words in it. You can use of these five words in whatever tense you'd like and use them more than once if you want. The five words are: Fire, Cloak, Far, Spit, and Kiss. I’m not a poet, nor will I ever be. But I like the challenge. This isn’t a poem by any means; instead I have tried to use these five words in the shortest unmistakably understood story possible.

I want to spit the kiss you gave to me under false pretense. I want to burn your deceiving cloak in a fire of shame. I want you to get far the hell away from me.

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open call, poetry, kiss, spit, far, cloak, fire

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Jeepcraze,
excellent...get it all out. thanks.
You're welcome! You made an excellent Open Call suggestion.
Quite creative! And poetry whether you realize it or not! You're my newest favorite - saw your comment about deafness on MrsRaptor's blog. You are in the right place on OS!
How about a haiku.....(yeah, I guess I'll post it)

Wearing a cloak of fire
that spit embers far above -
His kiss melted