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Jeff L. Howe

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Jeff Howe is a bonsai enthusiast and harmonica player who has very good reason to believe that the Universe tastes like a cheap buck-fifty melon. He is a product of Walled Lake and a former Poetry Slam Champion of Milwaukee. He once shook hands with Rocky Colavito, opened for Leon Redbone and took a piss next to Mose Allison (no hands were shaken). All things considered, his best single day was July 4th, 1987 when he marched in the Marmarth, North Dakota parade in the morning, discovered a rare dinosaur skull in the afternoon, and then sat in playing harmonica with a drunken cowboy band until way past tomorrow. It's been downhill ever since. Jeff is a misemployed geologist who specializes in interpreting rock outcrops at 70 miles per hour. It's a gift. His daughter loves cows. ................................................................................................................... FOR MORE STORIES, PHOTOS AND HARMONICA RECORDINGS VISIT: jeff-howe.net

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SEPTEMBER 23, 2009 6:37PM

A Young Man's Encounter With A Hawk

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A young man in his mid-20’s - shaggy blond hair and a scraggly, red young man’s beard - drove a school bus.  The route that he drove took him through the sparsely populated, remote interior of the Upper Peninsula of Michigan.   Following mostly dirt roads and muddy logging trails, he picked up the sons and daughters of farmers, loggers, taconite miners, hippies, Air Force wing nuts and commuters who drove daily to “city” jobs in Escanaba and Marquette.

He lived in a tiny, rented cabin in the woods with his young wife, who was the reading teacher at the six room school house that housed the entire district, grades K – 12. His bus was specially equipped with all-wheel drive and special tires that allowed him to cross unbridged streams and negotiate the axle-deep mud and snow so common for eight months of the Upper Peninsula year.  His route took him over 100 miles, twice a day.  The young man picked up all the children in the eastern half of the district.  An old man picked up those in the west.

This particular day was pristine. Stands of birch, giant maples and oaks ablaze in autumn color, intermingled with fragrant pines to form a canopy through which the dirt road tunneled.  The blue sky above showed up only in brief patches through the trees. The young man bounced along with his load of happy children, deep in thought.

High above the trees, a large, magnificent hawk circled silently in the bright sun.  Taking a bead on some unseen prey, it flicked its wings imperceptivity and dove quietly into the canopy.  Threading expertly through the branches and leaves, the hawk emerged at full speed into the tunnel of quiet along the road.

The hawk did not expect a large yellow bus.

The young man did not expect a hawk.

The bus was traveling north at about 30 miles per hour, the hawk was flying south, directly towards the bus, at 50 miles per hour.  Barely 20 feet separated them.  Within milliseconds they would collide. The eyes of the hawk and the eyes of the young man locked upon each other.  They gazed deep into each other’s brain.  There was no time for introductions, there was no time for translations, this was strictly business.  The communication was short, to-the-point, non-verbal, interspecies.

“Where did you come from?”  blinked the hawk.

“Where did YOU come from?”  blinked the young man.

“Which way are you going?”  blinked the hawk.

“The only way I CAN go.  Straight!”  blinked the young man.

“OK, don’t move”, blinked the hawk. 

Then the hawk flicked his wing tips and grabbed the wind, pulling up like a giant dive bomber, flashing white underbelly feathers in the windshield as he rode the air upwards and over the bus, barely grazing the top with his tail feathers. 

And with that, the hawk was gone.

The young man was transfixed.  Time had stopped.  The world was new.

“Hey, what was that?” shouted one of the kids in the seat behind the driver.

“Just a hawk,” said the young man from somewhere still deep within the mind of the big bird, “just a hawk.”

But the young man was profoundly moved by the experience, and he never forgot it.  

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Brilliant. Beautiful writing.
rated
Stunning. Heart stopping.
Barn storming good writing!!!
Beautiful writing Jeff.

I had a similar encounter a few years ago, driving East from Mt Hamilton, California to the I-5. In the middle of that drive is a small area of classic California landscape of oaks in meadows, surrounded by rounded hills. It's also got a few hundred yards of non-windy road, unlike the rest of that route, which has more bends than a sleeping python. As I rolled along I could see a large bird approach from my left, wings beating slowly. I often saw herons there and assumed that's what it was, until it crossed in front of me, maybe thirty feet in front of the truck I was driving. It was a golden eagle. It turned its head to its right and looked straight at me, then straight ahead again, and kept on right across, not varying its stroke at all. Its expression reminded me of a quote about raptors: "They look at you as if you owe them money".
Wow, I´m impressed. Fantastic writing, and how creative and powerful; congratulations and thanks.
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Marcela
Jeff, I did a mental "ahhhh shit" when I read the part about the bus/hawk encounter. But, your description of the "non-verbal" communication was terrific and volumes were communicated between human and raptor.
Once, long ago when I was about that same age I had a similar encounter driving along the Missouri River just south of Bismarck in a "close encounter" with a golden eagle picking at some carrion in the road. The wing span of that bird was nearly as wide as the car I was driving as it launched itself up and over my car. It too was an experience that I've never forgotten.
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Eventually the young man wrote the story down.

(Marcella: I'm still thinking about Juan Miguel...)
I've had a similar experience with pelicans. A sweet little tale well told.
Beautiful story, I loved it.
Os and all of the brilliant, poetic posts was best expressed in this short work. It is moving...it is wonderful..
I put in a lot of time at a raptor rehab center in the lower penensula a few years ago.

Did you just call me a fudgee?

We cared for the raptors that didn't quite get out of the way.
Raised some little ones too.

The Red Tails can learn around 10 comands, but their vocal and visual vocabulary is good enough to express themselves very well.

Raptors are very intelligent and are willing to allow for our primitive meanless life. "Stupid things never learn to fly!","Can't you see that mouse!","now stupid!" and of course "What about the money you owe me"
Juan Miguel...? Oh! Juan Martín (is that who you are talking about?) He came back to Argentina and was interviewed on many programs and newspapers. He is a boy from a town in the interior of Buenos Aires province: Tandil. Del Potro is very sweet but determined, low-profile, and a terrific player. I think we will have an excellent player for many years to come.
See you around.
Fantastic writing .Rated.
Crazy! I had one try to fly into my dining room just this week, I completely understand. I was left speechless.

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Simply amazing. Glad you shared this story.
This has a pristine beauty about it - it's like a moment perfectly captured in crystal.

I ran into an owl a couple of years ago - same profound effect, clearly.
Wonderful writing.
I've locked eyes with a sea lion for about a minute under the water in the Galapagos and felt we crossed the barrier between humans and other species. I felt the majesty you write about so beautifully and simply; it soars -- like the hawk.
Beautiful writing! I drove around the UP one vacation so could picture the setting in my head perfectly. Good job!
I appreciate all of the wonderful comments. Let me share with you something about how this particular story all came about. This is a true story, and one that I've been telling in comment for years. As some of you know through previous posts, I am presently working in a vineyard and so have amble contemplative time to roam in my own head. As I was working yesterday, a large hawk flew overhead and this story came to me in full form - I could see it and hear it completely from beginning to middle to end. I knew that if I just got home and wrote it down that it would be an interesting piece. You know how you just know those things some time? So as soon as I got home, I sat down at my computer, wrote it pretty much in a straight shot, did some edits, let my daughter read it and then posted it. It is, in a sense, pure art. I love it when that happens. Thanks again. Keep reading.
You put much more than meaning into your words. You tell secrets and share lessons. That's the gift of your writing. Beautiful.
Elegant and evocative. The most enjoyable thing I've read here in a while. Thanks.
I have had the distinct pleasure of witnessing the power and grace of hawks up close three times now. My first time was February 2006, when a Coopers Hawk snatched a pigeon in mid-flight and swooped right in front of my van as I pulled into my driveway. He/she alit in my neighbor's yard to dine on the catch, and I got to take a dozen photos. My second time was while I was out for a walk in early summer 2007, when again a Coopers Hawk snatched a blackbird in mid-air directly over my head (about a hundred feet up) and was then harassed by the blackbird's companions.

Once you've had a chance to look a hawk in the face, be that close to them, you never forget it and it indeed changes you.

Excellent post. It resonated deeply with me (can you tell?).

Rated.
That's a enviable memory. You write beautifully.
While walking my dog yesterday, I watched a small hawk swoop down into some low brush and emerge with a mouse in his talons.

Rated
Willie: Better that than your dog...
Beautiful. I could feel that, the feathers, the eyes...