Link to Poem: IF
I've updated the poem and added voice on the post previous to this one. I didn't know how to delete it and keep all the original content. This seemed like the least invasive solution. I added an explanation of sorts at the end if you care to read through that as well. Rather long, be warned, and perhaps might just make matters worse.
In the end, the piece is what you put into it and what it gives back to you. The explanation is there for you to see behind my mask a little and also to show some of the work behind it in answer to Marcela's open call.
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Anne Cameron Cutri
Penrose
the Zen Haitian
mamoore
Coyote Sal
Geraint Isitt
Salon.com
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http://open.salon.com/blog/jimenace/2009/06/25/if
The audio file is at the top of the post, the analysis text below. Just click on the “Play full song here” part of the player.
Enjoy!
( m&m )
Angelique - sorry about that! the original is one post down. I added this so it would appear as a new post without deleting previous comments on the original poem. :)
Metaness! Thank you so much for the help - I did not think to add a link in the post.
Peece!
dj
When i first heard yr voice, last time, i was surprised that it was n't gentle & cultured & ...sweet...then i saw this, and was expectin the street-voice...you fooled me again! I shall play it when my nerves need serious calming...
thanks fromall yr fans..Jimbo
peece,
dj