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Jesse Mitchell

Jesse Mitchell
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I am a 30 year cattle farmer. I have 4 children (3 girls and 1 boy) who range in age from 7 years down to 2 months. I am married, been with the same woman now for 10 years. I have worked as a cook, salesman, tailor, engineer's assistant, and also a bomb maker . I have been writing my entire life (really I mean that like all of it even way down into 'em baby years) and still, feh, not so good. I wish there was more to say about me but no such luck. Oh, yes you can all just call me, Jesse. I have seen the trouble people have when replying to me and they find that they must use that awkward JMitch79 business...so my name is Jesse and you may call me by it.

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MAY 5, 2010 12:29PM

The Suicide of Dorothy Hale

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The Suicide of Dorothy Hale

 

A thousand miles up

A hundred thousand miles above

Looking down

As the air blasts though

Punching in holes

In me

In sight

In red below

In everything.

The hunger is the thing

The hunger is the sting,

Right

Always falling and rising

The coming and goings

The play and the parts

Just have to stay hungry’

Right.

Asylum , bordello, asylum

Bordello

Whatever they say

Is true.

What is there not to love

When you are so pretty

What is there left to hate.

It is the hunger

It really is

That is all it is

Just got to stay hungry

And hold on

Hold on.

Black hairs flying randomly,

Wildly

Widely

From here to there

From behind ears and out of

Bobby pins and clips and

Stiff little fingers

Holding it still…

Holding me still

Asylum , bordello, asylum

Bordello

I am having a bad thought

Bad thoughts

All the way down

All the way down

Oh, I know

the

Bad thoughts

Of Kahlo’s red

Red

Red paint.

Blowing holes

The air blows holes right though me

Staying hungry

Hungry

And holding on.

 

 

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well, apparently this one is gonna die. hmmmm.
I saw that painting in person at sf moma....they said that dorothy's mother commissioned the painting and was more than shocked at how graphic it turned out to be. I like this. thank-you.
See, high school is superflous. No one ever learns facts like this in high school. This is fascinating. Rated.

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I knew that name rang a bell - had to go look her up to remember clearly.

Oh, and it's apparently Clare Booth Luce who commissioned the painting.

Poor dear thing - at 33, feeling washed up...
I'll help feed you.........xo
I'll help feed you.........xo
I got confused and thought of Dorothy Gale. And it still worked brilliantly. Now I have to go find the true subject. I'll come back with context.
jesse-this is nice poetry. nice images, ?nice, stupid word.how about vivid images! Like this one "The hunger is the thing, The hunger is the sting", and this one"Oh, I know

the

Bad thoughts

Of Kahlo’s red

Red

Red paint"
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I went the same direction as aim and yes it did still work! Very well done!
Jesse, this was great.
red is definately a strong image word. I like the way this makes me feel like I'm panicking and whirling around with her. ...
Another great one from ya!! Rated.
houston we have a problem

no seriously, very well-done, always so original