Kathy Riordan

Kathy Riordan
Location
Florida, United States
Birthday
April 27
Bio
One woman's view of life and the universe. Follow @katriord on Twitter. Some nice people have said some incredibly nice things about me, which I appreciate, including being called "The mayor of Twitter" (@palafo), "The Queen of Twitter" (@lizadonnelly), "One of the funniest women on the planet" (@LATimestot), and "A friend to many" (@BillGatesZune).

OCTOBER 23, 2009 10:32PM

Open Salon Weekends: I'll Take Poetry for a Hundred, Alex

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I've been trying to post some different things on the weekends when everything is more relaxed--the Muffin story, photos of the northwoods. Here's the first time you'll see me post poetry on Open Salon, something I wrote many years ago for my father after he died.

Have a great weekend, everyone.

 

 

daddy did you dream me up 

 

Daddy did you dream me up

to be a name among the newsprint

underneath the Sunday headlines,

or a phantom of the footlights,

flawless face of current fashion,

shining star?

 

You were never one to dream at night, and once

it didn't really matter

if I hung your hopes at all.

 

Let me tend my fires on the mountain.

Let me play with traffic in the street.

 

Let me wrap your love around me

like a shawl and let me breathe 

the life we found between the centerfolds and Sunday books.

 

We have strayed away from Sunday looks-- 

And now I trace your image in the faces that I meet.

 

You're the only Christ I ever knew

but your fear of faith will follow you

and fading fast, I follow, too. 

 

Scan 092950000 

Window in Newport, September 1990.

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Good to see some good poetry on OS. Rated.
This was really nice. You should poetry more often.
You are not easy to pigeonhole, Kathy. You have much to say in a variety of different ways. I'd be interested to learn more about your intent as a a writer and what you want your writing legacy to be. There is a big mine of material....I like that you continue to dig deep and unearth parts of yourself, even when it is done in sometimes incongruent pieces. I am intrigued by what it is you are trying to say/be or if this is a puzzle you would like readers to piece together for you? Nicely done. My poetry about my father would certainly not reflect these sentiments at all.
Wow! You should do this more often. The final stanza is superb. I love the alliteration, the religious ambivalence, the "fading" of pentameter into tetrameter, and the marvelously reflective and evocative last line. Thank you for this.
beautiful. I agree with cartouche -- you're quite the renaissance woman.
Wonderful. Now I see why the tiara. Rated. More poems, please!
This was great. A writer and a Poet, good at both!
R~
Very nice. Like a warm cup of tea. And an assault weapon. Comforting and enjoyable.

Rated.
Hate poetry, suprised that I loved this. GAWD you're good.
I'm glad to see some good poetry here. Keep it coming, even if it's only on the weekend.
I love poems. They say so much more than prose and they are quıcker to read. I thınk thıs poem ıs melancholy, and paınts ıts ımages effortlessly but effectıvely. Brava! Rated
Beautiful, moving poem! and thanks for your kind words on my post :)
This is beautiful. Love the structure and images and especially the line "And now I trace your image in the faces that I meet."
Very nice and filled with sentiment, Kathy! Here's hoping you will write more poetry!
lovely. I especially love the first paragraph.
Thank you, all. I'm happy to see this poem well received.
Kathy,

All what cartouche said and then some: Very nice poem; deep and visual. It reminds of no other poet but you.

Rated.
Like I said recently, you could make pudding out of mud. Your writing makes me feel comfortable somehow...not only reading it but with you. It puts me at ease. Thank you for this and your style(s).