Kathy Riordan

Kathy Riordan
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April 27
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MARCH 31, 2010 12:01AM

Floating

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THE WEIGHTLESSNESS OF FLOATING upside down is freeing, staring up at an azure sky, glistening sunlight.

Warm in a pool of water, cradled completely by it, palms waving gently overhead, tall sentinels.  Objects may be larger than they appear.

It could be anywhere.  The Mirage at Vegas.  A saltwater pool in Venice.  Surrounded by waterfalls in Hawaii, with soft breezes, mauka showers, the smell of plumeria, birds at sunset.

Close your eyes and everything goes, the unquiet melting into turquoise warm.

Floating.  Floating anywhere, nowhere.  Nothing to disturb, nothing to carry.

Floating.

 

 

Then a backstroke.  And another. 

 

 

Stroke.

It's a powerful word, alternately threatening and soothing.

Stroking a kitten.  Having a stroke of genius, or very good luck.  Stroking one's ego.  Being a stroke up. 

Doing the backstroke.

Stroke, stroke.  Glide.  The water will take you where you want to go.

 

 

Feet ease down into hot sand, stretch, caress, explore.  No weight there, no pressure, no pain.  Curl up, let go, and float.

 

 

Stroke.

It's a powerful word.

The weightlessness of floating upside down, staring up at a glistening ceiling, monitors overhead, palms waving, the unquiet, the chirp of machines.

Close your eyes and everything goes, goes away, way beyond the stroke, to a place where silent sentinels stand in the breeze and caress.  

Feel the sand.  Hear the birds.  

 

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Cardiovascular disease continues to be one of the most formidable and sinister killers in the United States.  Stroke is currently the third leading cause of death behind heart disease and cancer and the most significant disease affecting long-term disability.

Every 40 seconds in the US someone suffers a stroke, and every four minutes, someone dies from one. 

For more information on cardiovascular disease and stroke, including transient ischemic attacks (TIA), see:   The American Stroke Association

For more information on caregiving, see:   Heart of Caregiving 

 

 

 

photo "Floating" by Kathy Riordan 

 

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As some know, I was in Hawaii this past week recharging my batteries as a caregiver. During much of that time, my mother was again fighting for her life, this time in a Utah hospital after traumatic transport from Oregon. Most of the week she was again on a ventilator. Friday she was successfully taken off the ventilator.

Saturday she had a stroke.

This, again, is for her.
Best wishes for your mother's recovery, Kathy!
Your a stroke of genius !
Poetic and powerful. Good thoughts to your family.
Oh, Kathy, I am so sorry. Your words create the timelessness that comes with stroke... of whichever kind. Your post reminds me of scuba diving and the shock of coming onto land again.
Well done, well written . . . and sending good energy to you and your mother.
wow: "Close your eyes and everything goes, the unquiet melting into turquoise warm" and "The weightlessness of floating upside down, staring up at a glistening ceiling, sentinels overhead, palms waving, the unquiet, the chirp of machines." I love how these work together. Powerful. Sorry you have been having a tough time, but glad you have your power of expression...
I would never have guessed this soothing, visually blissful piece would end with such a jolt. So sorry, Kathy, that your mom is battling the down side of life and that you are there to whitness something of such great sadness, draining your juices, leaving you deplete at times.
Your writing is stunning, soulful and a a tribute your mother would cherish deeply.
sending good thoughts to your mom and your whole family
i'm so sorry to hear this news, kathy. i'll be thinking of you and the people you care for.
I love this. It's part poetry and part community service message. Thank you for it Kathy.
And what others have already said better than I ever could; my best wishes for your mom and you and your entire family.
Sending good thoughts Kathy, for you and your Mom. She's had it so tough these past few months. And I know how much that hurts.
My heart goes out to you Kathy. My mother suffered from a decade of mini-strokes, or Senile Dementia, which doesn't convey the sadness. You and your mother are in my thoughts.
I know you know how much I want and crave the best for your Mom. Your expression of this particular journey is stunning. You are inspiring.
well done, Kathy. R.
I loved the poems, and the words you have said here in this post. Oh so every true. Sometimes it doesn't even matter how old or young you are when it happens.
Beautifully written.. Thank you
I wondered if this was inspired by your photo then I realized that your mom was ill with further reading. Well done, and I hope that things get better for your mother and for you too. Rated.
Beautiful calm amid the disturbing news. Hope you're still in that place; hope your mother bounces back.
Wrap yourself and your mom in hope. Thinking of you across this span.
My thoughts are with you and all your loved ones, Kathy.
Beautifully written - wished I was there with you! I hope your mother pulls through - I'll keep you in my prayers. :-)
Kathy, I am so sorry. Sending you and your Mom good thoughts...
Hopeful for your mom's recovery! Also, please take care of yourself so you can be there for your mom.
Beautiful piece. Will be thinking of you and your mother.
Im caring for my mother too. Floating with you!
Peace be with you, Namaste
Sincere best wishes for your mom's recovery go to you, and your family.
Best wishes and good for you, taking in the best of life along with the unpredictable.
I am so sorry, dear one. My love and prayers to your mother and family...xox
Thinking about you and your mother, Kathy.
Greg's mom had stroke after stroke.
I wish I were talking about the backstroke.

Thank you for this relaxing yet extremely informative and important post. miss you.
positive thoughts... welcome back, Kathy.
Kathy, best wishes to you and you mom!
We're all thinking positively for her.
She raised a great daughter.
Gorgeous photo, Kathy. Good luck to your mom. She sure is a fighter.
Sending you strong wishes for strength. We just do it, but it does help to hear we're not alone. You're in my thoughts and prayers.
Continued good thoughts and prayers, Kathy.
Best wishes, Kathy. A lovely tribute.
Powerful piece of writing.
R
Whoah. Your comment explains the lull into a false sense of calm and the sudden left jab. A TKO.

Kathy: Thoughts and wishes for healing with you.
OH, my good ness. Thoughts and prayers with your mother and you and all your family, Kathy.

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oh, kathy, i'm so sorry. my thoughts and prayers are with you. so glad you're able to use writing and your creativity to share your experience. know that you're not alone.
I was floating in the Sea of Cortez today. I didn't have the ocean to myself because everyone is on holiday down here, and they all camp at the beach. However, I did have my first run-in with a seal in the ocean, which I take for a sign of good luck. And I swam my 1km+ nonstop. r
I am so sorry about your Mother. At first, I was actually feeling more relaxed because of your post until I got toward the end and saw the information about strokes. Thank you for sharing this and for making us more aware of the facts. I will include your Mom in my prayers.