Kathy Riordan

Kathy Riordan
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JULY 4, 2010 6:25PM

The Sound of Trees (sonnet, but no smackdown)

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All I hear are trees.  Hemlock, pine,

Birch that falls when no one is around

Recalls the land in each direction, mine

But for a season, not forever, found.

 

And failing nothing, reason heavenward

The lofty branches hailing to the sun

Make soft until the native breeze is heard,

A plaintive rustled slipping, slightly done.

 

An eagle circles overhead in flight

While furry gathers scatter to make clear; 

A loon calls, takes her newborn through the night.

This, and my own breath, is all I hear.

 

The silence yet compels us now to stay

Forever, as forever binds a day.

 

 

photo "Treesound"  © Kathy Riordan 

 

This post was awarded a Poetry Pick of the week by Dave Rickert: 

 

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I love the way you started this--very immediate. I felt completely absorbed into these lines. Absolutely wonderful.
As I read this I find my brain is full of your words, and this is so well written you take me with you. The alliteration blows me away.
The peacefulness of this (along with the picture) is wonderful.
"This, and my own breath, is all I hear"

This line alone is touching enough, but then, all the lines are!

Gorgeous sonnet.
that part about only borrowing the land for a time - yeah - that resonates.
But when the Birch falls and no one is around... does it really make a sound? ;)

Loved this, takes me back to a time when I lived near the woods.
Kathy,

This is so soft and soothing. Thanks.
This makes me want to open wide my eyes and gently sigh at the magnificence of all you observe. And I think it is WONDERFUL, which I assume I am allowed to tell you since you've indicated this is NOT part of the smack down! I'm so confused! So lovely, Kathy...truly.
Ah, so nice ... so lovely!

Rated ... with peaceful serenity in the midst of mother nature!
I like this, especially the rhyming couplet. That's my favorite part.
Thanks.
The eagle and the trees I see with you
And now, in silence, I bid you adieu.

Okay, your couplet was better.

(Very nice!)
Immersed in every thought you convey, I did not want to come up for air on this one......
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As this left me breathless, I could only hear the trees. Beautiful, Kathy.
"The silence yet compels us now to stay

Forever, as forever binds a day."

Wonderful images, sounds and picture. Thank you and congratulations on your PP.
I hear it... the silence and the loon calling... how peaceful...
I hear it... the silence and the loon calling... how peaceful...