After reading Kathy Riordan's beautiful poem today, I was inspired to go back to my college days and take a shot at it:
I Thought I Could Remember How to Write a Villanelle
I thought I could remember how to write a villanelle
The bird perched on top of the red dying leaf
Looks forward and listens as if he can tell
That I do not remember how to conquer this swell
Form that can frustrate so and bring on fits of grief
I thought I could remember how to write a villanelle!
Wind whispers to Canada geese as they yell
And fill up the sky for a moment, then each
Looks forward and listens as if he can tell
Just what he'll find in the neighboring cell
Of suburbia soccer field, meadow or beach
I thought I could remember how to write a villanelle.
It's only Saturday but I hear a church bell
Ring as a squirrel, while holding the pit of a peach,
Looks forward and listens as if he can tell
That through my brain like a bat out of hell
Run the words that repeat on the page within reach:
"I thought I could remember how to write a villanelle.
Looks forward and listens as if he can tell."
Join the train: post your villanelle for the weekend OSers to enjoy. . .it's like brain exercise. . .


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Joan: See, the difference between those math problems and the villanelle is that writing poetry leaves you feeling energized (no matter how bad it is, if you conquered the rhyme scheme you feel like a success!) while math problems just leave you feeling drained.
Go ahead, try one! I bet you'll surprise yourself!
But at least now I don't have to ask what the hell you guys are all talking about.
Thank you for these. They're kinda cool. The construct makes my brain hurt, but they're kinda cool.
Well done.
This is fun (your poem) (and villanelles)
Thank you for sharing yours.