Linda Treiber

Linda Treiber
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FEBRUARY 29, 2012 7:28AM

Pumped Up Kicks Redux

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Driving my daughter to school before dawn yesterday, after the daily slap fight to control the tuner, I found myself enjoying a song she had chosen on the radio.  That alone was a miracle with the gravitas of a full galaxy convergence, but this song was good.  It had a fresh infectious beat and some auto tune effects limning the vocals in a creative way. 

The lyrics caught me too.  Something about a “cowboy kid” rolling his own cigs. 
Robert's got a quick hand.
He'll look around the room; he won't tell you his plan.
He's got a rolled cigarette, hanging out his mouth, he's a cowboy kid.

 
We were cruising along to this tune, bobbing our heads and I lost track of the lyrics in favor of the cute pop beat and the actual riff of whistling threading through the melody.
“I really like this song. I guess that’s the kiss of death for it then?  If I like it, it must be crap, right?"
She looked at me like I’d fatally fired a rogue synapse. “No, Mom. I like the song, but ‘like’ might not be the best word here…” I hardly heard her. I opted instead to lose myself in the tune again, bopping down the road with my surly daughter.

Yea, he found a six shooter gun.
In his dads closet hidden in a box of fun things, and I don't even know what.
But he's coming for you; yeah he's coming for you.
Cowboy kid.  Six shooter. I remembered when we played cowboys with our cap guns in the back yard with my cousins. I chuckled to myself about sharing some genetics with Jesse James, many degrees removed from the immediate family tree…

All the other kids with the pumped up kicks you'd better run, better run, outrun my gun.
All the other kids with the pumped up kicks you'd better run, better run, faster than my bullet.
Faster than my bullet?  Must be some reference to Superman. Faster than a speeding bullet. I spent a few seconds talking myself into some fantasy and out of what I had just heard. But then the story of it broke through the contagious beat.

Daddy works a long day.
He be coming home late, yeah he's coming home late.
And he's bringing me a surprise.
'Cause dinner's in the kitchen and it's packed in ice.
“Mom, you know what this song’s about don’t you?”  She was familiar with my expression, a face clench when something hideous just dawns on me.
“Not until now.”
 
“Well, it’s about an abused kid who shoots up his family and his school with his dad's gun.  You know, like Columbine."
The song was ending as I swung into the circular drive in front of Boone High. A silent stream of crusty-eyed disheveled teenagers shuffled by.  The sun was sending sprays of red above the horizon as my daughter jumped out of the car, adjusted her ass exposing low cut jeans, and threw her backpack over her shoulder. Red in the morning, sailors take warning...
She went to slam the car door…
“Bye , Mom. I love you.”
“Wait!” I blurted it out, a bee stinging my tongue.

I've waited for a long time.
Yeah the slight of my hand is now a quick pull trigger,
I reason with my cigarette,
And say your hair's on fire, you must have lost your wits, yeah.


I pictured myself jamming the car into park.
I saw myself running, (better run), and dragging her back into the car. I saw myself burning tire rubber to leave that god forsaken place where every angry looking kid with a backpack now haunted my mind; where every bitter bullied kid plotted mayhem to make "them all" pay for slights, real or unreal, finally attaining the kind of cool only a killer can earn. 

It wouldn’t matter if my daughter was a gentle unassuming shy person or the sharply witty, loud and sometimes confrontive personality that she is. She’d still be one of all the other kids.
I saw myself there to rescue her from it. But I can't.
All the other kids with the pumped up kicks you'd better run, better run, outrun my gun.
All the other kids with the pumped up kicks you'd better run, better run, faster than my bullet.

[Whistling]
“I love you too. Be careful in there, ok?”








Thank you to Foster The People for their song Pumped Up Kicks.

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I think pouring information out about this young man, paying obssessive attention to him, is the incomplete and clueless media trying to answer our number one question about it: WHY?
Thanks so much for this.
W.o those car radio hand-wrestling mtches I'd never have realized that I like, very much, Nelly, Eminem, and Kanye West.
PS Golddigger is a fabulous sardonic rewrite of Baby Ray Charles' I GOT A WOMAN. I guess you know that!

r.
Linnnn, I hope you don't have to post this a third time.
I remember this post - this is the first post of yours I had the pleasure to read - been a fan ever since
Thought of your post when I heard the news.
Haven't watched any of it.
It's not really news.
I guess I will never get it. but deep anger does awful things.
HUGGGGGGGGG
You introduced me to this song and I was obsessed with it for weeks. I still listen to it pretty often. I am drawn in by the juxtaposition of the dark lyrics and the cheery melodies and rhythm. It speaks to me of the people - the boys, generally - who do these things - dark and deeply miserable surrounded by a light, cheery and high-school-shallow world they can neither understand nor join while wanting desperately to. Maybe I'm an oddball but I think they are possibly more tragic than their victims. Think of it - which would you rather your own child be?

I'm sorry you had reason to post this again.
I remember reading this post the first time. It was the first time I'd heard that song. I've listened to it 100 times since then and it's a favorite.
I remember this post as well -- It's a chilling song, especially because it's got such a kicky beat. Whistle while you work...wonder when someone will make that into a dark tune?
What comes around goes around.
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Very scary. I've often wondered why the media tend to glorify the perp at the expense (again) of the victims. I suppose its always been that way. Great piece about a tough topic! r
Well-written, nice rhythm.

Yeah, remember when schools were welcoming overall? A second home of sorts...well, for me, it was. I feel sad its become something else because school was wonderful for me. I used to cry if I was sick and couldn't go! Now...I understand your concerns. Send your kid to martial arts school; it helps them tune into dangerous situations before they happen and possibly defend themselves...it's the best you can do. Too many girls are in cellphone land, clueless to danger.
I just don't even know what to say. Makes me shiver.