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Danger dressed in black lace
Billowing above the limbs
That will soon become rockets
Landing where they may
Beauty trumps fear
and offers the promise of raindrops
For the crackling landscape
Begging to be slaked
Subtle vertigo-inducing Motion
agitates the lace from black to grey
and back again
Assembling for the assault
Drumrolls portend the curtain's rise
the clouds release the Strobes
in jagged streaks that hide and seek
releasing Nature's angst.
Words and images by L in the Southeast
2012


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Lezlie
Lezlie
Good work.
Matt: I'm downright giddy that people are liking this. Thank you for your encouraging -- no, delightful words.
Deb: Thanks so much.
The tone of this poem is perfect! Wonderful words, images and voice!
Beautifully done!
she's wearing black lace ~ because she wants
to remind me ~ to get really serious
about climate change.
If you're not familiar with this music, I'm about to do you a major favor.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FkiekSYfK-0&feature=relmfu
This is van Beethoven's Symphony #6, the Pastorale, in this case conducted by Herbert von Karajan. There are a couple of videos before this one, but this is the one with the thunderstorm. It starts at three minutes in (so start a little sooner) and finishes at the end of this particular video (there's another after this). You'll have to play with your volume control because the very beginning is really soft, but suddenly crescendos to reallyloud. The storm itself is cool but my favorite parts are the very beginning, where he captures exactly what it's like when it's just starting, and at the end, when it's leaving. Most of his symphonies aren't programatic like this - they're not specifically about something.
To my knowledge, the best storm in classical music. Maybe the best in music period.
"Drumrolls portend the curtain's rise
the clouds release the Strobes
in jagged streaks that hide and seek
releasing Nature's angst."
breathtakingly expressed. the metaphor of the curtain and the strobes! love the internal rhyme of streaks and release and seek. And "jagged streaks that hide and seek" WOW!!! love it. appreciate the poetic license you use for conciseness there! Bravo.
Best, libby