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Little Kate

Little Kate
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Lismore, New South Wales, Australia
Birthday
September 13
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When life gives you a hundred reasons to cry, show life that you have a thousand reasons to smile. ~ Author Unknown

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MARCH 6, 2010 5:58AM

SAFE HAVEN

Rate: 4 Flag

Solitary silence he seeks

Away from the celebration of him 

 

 

Kerfuffle and commotion

He does not covet 

 

 

He retreats to the tree’s shady veil 

Respite and relief silently welcomed 

 

 

Detached and almost concealed

The wooden pony his dependable friend 

 

 

Dappled light playfully dancing

Seclusion does not disappoint 

 

 

Sanctuary, Shelter

Stay safe, oh beautiful child

 

Copyright © 2010 by K A Little

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Your words painted the perfect picture, just enough so that I could see the party and the child playing alone in my mind.
Oh if only they could stay safe like that for the rest of their lives. Lovely poem and highly rated.
Just lovely, and you used "kerfuffle" too! The Cat in the Hat wisely said: "It is fun to have fun, but you have to know how." Looks like this little one knows how.
mamoore - Hi! I'm so glad it came through and so thrilled to have your feedback. Thank you.

Torman - Yes, if only. ... We can only do our best and the rest is out of our control. Thank you so much fo leaving me a comment.

Pilgrim - Hi there! Yes, each to his own ... for this little one, fun was never to be found in the usual places.
Such awonderful pictiure you paint...and souch beautiful words you use to paint it.
JD - Thank you for reading and your very kind words. Much appreciated.
Beautiful and touching, and bonus points for using "kerfuffle!" I've been one a one-woman quest to spread it across America. I never heard it until I saw Little Britain....r...
Audrey - Hi! Thanks for reading and leaving me a comment. Much appreciated. 'Kerfuffle' is an interesting word, isn't it? Good luck with your quest ... hope I've helped just a little!