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APRIL 11, 2010 5:15AM

Feeling Blue : 101

Rate: 11 Flag

 

 

Why do I feel this way?

Sad, unhappy, alone

Despair, misery and dismay

You’re a wretched cyclone!

 

Why do you taunt me so?

I don’t want to lose hope

I hate feeling so low

Now I’m at the end of my rope!

 

Why am I so downhearted?

Feeling tortured and afraid

Let’s finish this thing we’ve started

And call it a day.

 

Why do you do this to me?

Please let it cease!

This is ugly

And all I want is peace.

 

Why must I grieve?

And to desolation succumb?

I wish you to go! Leave!

I am frozen, so numb! 

  

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I know, I know ... a real contrast to my last post but life is like that ... full of contrasts, ups and downs ...
Life *is* like that. Hope the down begins to point in a new direction soon.
Without the "downs," we'd never fuly appreciate the "ups."

Well done, my friend.
JD: Very, very true!
I try to learn from the downs how precious the ups are...but the downs have great lessons too, that we can often only appreciate looking back at them. Rated
I get it, Little Kate, I get it. But when you are at the "end of your rope" the key is to hang on and don't let go. Instead, put one hand over the other , slowly but surely, until you reach the other end. Just don't let go.
Lezlie
Very nice piece, well said.
Rated.
Mary Ann: Thank you for stopping by my friend. Yes, I agree, it's later that we can appreciate that we've learnt something from the times that have been sent to test us.

Lezlie: I know where you're coming from but with this particular dilemma (person) I feel like I've been hanging on for so long now that I really think I might need to let it (them) go.

Thoth: Thank you kind sir! I am so glad to have you stop by. Much appreciated.
Take care, Little Kate.
It's good to put our feelings in a capsule at times...then swallow them whole!
trilogy: Thank you. I am thrilled to have you stop by.
Joan H: Will do! Many thanks.

Just Cathy: Ahh, such wise words. Thank you my friend.
LK: I love trying to work in verse. The last line captures how I end up feeling after much strife and bickering. I get numb. That's not a good place. Good job getting it down on paper though.

Rated
Working in verse is very much a new-found focus for me so I'm thrilled if others are enjoying it too. I am, of course, a novice so please don't expect too high a quality from me ... I am trying though. Thank you for understanding too. I am so glad you dropped by.
mLee: And well done you ... using Aussie slang ... Beauty, mate!

I really appreciate your feedback ... thank you.
Strong with sorrow and yet to begin anew.
Rated.
Oh yes, a familiar place and time. I sigh for you and send a good thought.
scylla: Hello my friend. Thank you for stopping by ... It is good to hear from you. The quandaries of life! May we endure them and ultimately learn from them and see the good.
l'Heure Bleue: Thank you dear friend. How sweet and kind you are. I appreciate it.
There's that strong feeling again. rated.
P.S. so funny to find you somewhere else and realize that you also hung out around these OS parts.
Hi Caroline! Yes, it's so nice to see you there and here! "Where's there?" they may ask ... Well, that's for Caroline, Trilogy and I to know and for others to find out!

I appreciate your feedback here too! Kindest regards.
Kate.
Such longful words...and from far away lands from me.
You write with feeling!
You write with talent!
GWW: Thank you so much for stopping by and also for the lovely, kind words. Much appreciated indeed!
Today I'm not blue - it is after all International Dawn Chorus Day