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Little Kate
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When life gives you a hundred reasons to cry, show life that you have a thousand reasons to smile. ~ Author Unknown

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JUNE 30, 2010 9:58PM

ECSTASY

Rate: 32 Flag

A sprinkle of tiny freckles

          Adorn her pretty face

Her golden hair a curly frame

          His fingers long to trace

 

Contentment and pure joy she brings

          To each and every day

His mind has filled with hopes and dreams

           That she is here to stay

 

He cannot wait to hold her close

          And smell her perfumed skin

To drink in her proximity

          And let their love begin

 

His eager body aches and burns

          With powerful desire

He cannot fight it any more

          He needs to quench the fire

 

He makes his move, he takes her hand

          And leads her to his bed

She does not pause, she wants this too

          No word between them said

 

To gentle touch she does respond

          His heart begins to race

Rousing wave of love and passion

          He rides with eager pace

 

He rides until he can no more

          Then ecstasy gives chase

 


 

Words © 2010 K A Little.

All Rights Reserved.

 

 

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Mercy me! Kate this is simply superb!
This is truly beautiful, in a love filled innocent, romantic kind of way. Nothing to hide from here, it is delicately done, and all good. R
So beautiful, Kate. Ssoft and flowing. Love the line "To drink in her proximity". Great job.
Oh my.....I miss those days. This was very erotic, sensual, damn good!
"Young love, our love....
filled with deep emotion" words by someone who escapes me at the moment but your poem made me break out singing!
(R)ated for doing so.
Exceptional poem. Beautiful
rated
Oh My!
Did I love this!!!!!
And talk about erotic yet pure!


I need to go take a shower, but I will return!!!
so VERY rated=============
A series of perfect moments. So beautiful.
I really like the simplicity and cleaness of this verse -- wonderful memories ---
Just beautiful, Kate. What a nice way to say Goodnight and sign off till tomorrow. ~R~ with ecstasy
beautifully said, kate. just right.
WOW, I love it. - He rides with eager pace.
Smithery sent me here, I am glad.
Fay: I'm glad you liked it Fay.

Sheila: I know , I know ... I'm an old romantic nut at heart and innocent, simple romance is my style!

Trilogy: Thank you sweetpea! So glad you liked it too.

LL2: They needn't be gone dear friend ... : )
Lovely. Just so lovely. Thank you.
mLee: I hope your thirst has been quenched dear friend. And freckles ... I hope you like them!

Fred: I'm flabbergasted that someone could break out into song over one of my poems! How wonderful! Those words sound very familiar to me too!

Mike: I'm so happy to see you here my friend. Thank you for such a wonderful compliment!
I need my return comment soon....it is bed time in kc.. : )
What a poem!!!
"unfolds fan" . . . . . HOOOOOOTTTTT!
JD: Sorry to keep you up at this late hour my dear, dear friend! I'm so glad you loved this but take it easy on the water ... it such a precious thing ... just like the friends I find here!
Got it. Water is precious....and so is your poem.
Nite to you, Little Kate.
Smithery: A man of "whew" words tonight, Smithery!!!

ame i: Sweet dreams!

l'heure Bleue: A lovely comment from a beautiful lady!
Goodnight, JD! Sweet dreams!
Marty's Husband: Thank you my friend! Cheers to happy memories!
Fusun: You've probably long gone to bed by now but just in case ... Goodnight! Sweet dreams to you too my friend.

dianaani: Thank you gorgeous lady!

RomanticPoetess: Another poet! Welcome! And I owe Smithery a huge THANK YOU! I'm so glad you liked it.

Sally: Thank you too for stopping by again ... I'm thrilled you liked it too.

Lady Miko: I hope the fan did the trick! I forget that it's summertime in the US and you guys are already probably overheated!
Rated for giving me that special smile. My sweetie would thank you as well.
A very beautiful poem. R
Again, the rating won't stick.
I'm glad I couldn't sleep! Great Job!
Oryoki: Smiling back at you! I hope you and your sweetie enjoy!

Judge: Thank you ... I really appreciate it!

Scanner: I'm kinda glad too! No seriously, it is way past bedtime over there. Goodnight!
You've said it all! It doesn't get much better than this.
Woooo! OWOOOOOOOOooooooo...
Whew! You have me panting. Nice Work. R-
Little Kate!!! You have this old bird all astir with this poem. I feel my inner-cougar gearing up for a prowl. Tee hee

Lezlie
I love this - galloping good !
Patricia: Maybe not but then again ... it just might! Many thanks to you!

Gabby: Many thanks! : )

Matt: Great whistle! I could hear it all the way from Australia!

Dave: Nothing wrong with panting ... usually a sign of a good workout!

Lezlie: Happy prowling! Woo hooo to you!

Kim: Wow ... Thank you!
I'm now fanning myself like mad!
PW: Te he ... this poem seems to have had my OS friends taking all sorts of measures to cool themselves down!
Mark: I am extremely grateful for this wonderful feedback! Your writing just blows me away so to have this from you .... wow! Thank you, Mark!
You Aussies are a steamy bunch. Mercy me as Fay said.
Like. Wow! Very romantic, sensual, beautiful.

R
Fernsy: LOL! I hope I haven't come down a peg or two in your eyes!

RARoberts: Thank you kind sir! I'm so glad you liked it!
hot stuff my dear
Captured the beauty, the longing, the tenderness, the moment. Thank you for this.

Rated.
Jack: Judging by other comments ... fans, cool drinks or showers seem to help! Thanks for reading and commenting.

Charlie: Ahhh, it warms my heart to receive such a lovely compliment. Thank you Charlie!
Hubba hubba, Little Kate. I'll have to read this one to Mr. Vance!
Bell: LOL!! Hubba Hubba Bing Bang BOOM! I hope Mr Vance enjoys too!
Oh, my! I need to cool off now . . . .
Pilgrim: Oops! Sorry to overheat you so early in the day!