On silver star a gleam
Reflecting purest love
And by crescent moon I dream
His love a radiant beam
Glowing warmth from above
On silver star a gleam
Love flitters so supreme
On the wings of a dove
And by crescent moon I dream
Love like a gentle stream
Meanders hand in glove
On silver star a gleam
Time and distance extreme
But ‘tis him I think of
And by crescent moon I dream
Enchanted it may seem
He is my one truelove
On silver star a gleam
And by crescent moon I dream
Words © 2010 K A Little.
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Comments
Caroline: It's lovely to see you again ... and thank you so much. I do appreciate you reading and commenting.
Patricia: Wow, thank you for such a lovely compliment!
trilogy: Hi there, tril! I really appreciate your thoughts on my poetry ... I've never done a Villanelle before! I know what it's like to not have much time (I certainly pulled this one together in a bit of a rush I must admit) so I say by all means re-post ... I don't see it as cheating.
smithery: I have the chance to gaze out my window at the moon and stars most evenings... and sit with my thoughts and dreams .. and I do feel very much at peace.
Dave: Thank you for the challenge! I didn't think I was going to find time to try this one and I did rush it a bit but I enjoyed it very much. I've learnt something new about poetry and that makes me happy ... YAY!!!!!
Sheila: Oh please don't stop! To think my poetry could bring that out of you is just so amazing to me! What a beautiful compliment and comment!
RomanticPoetess: Goodness ... thank you too for such a lovely compliment!
Fusun: I am an absolute hopeless romantic at heart as is evident in my writing it seems! I hope tonight's moon smiles down on you with love, peace and happiness, my friend.
bernadine: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.
Mimetalker: ... and my smile widens all the more! Thank you.
And none to easy to pull off either!
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Marty's Husband: How wonderful! You know something? Tonight I saw just THE most glorious crescent moon that I have EVER seen .. a clear winter night sky here in my little corner of Australia with the moon and the stars shining ever so brilliantly! Absolutely amazing!!!
Kim: For some reason I'm a little overwhelmed that you love it! Thank you!!!
ladyslipper: Thank you for dropping by ... I'm glad you liked it too!
Irania: Goodness .... thank you too! I appreciate all these wonderful comments ... I only hope they ARE well deserved.
Poorsinner: My pleasure! Thank you for reading it.
sophieh: A new friend! It's lovely to meet you! .... and thanks so much!