First kiss. O dulcet, glorious, first kiss!
Undeniable, absolute and sweet.
Honeyed naivety. Breathtaking bliss.
Nigh naught in life can possibly compete.
Your kiss. O mellifluous, first true kiss!
Delicate symphony of pure passion.
My heart surrenders; it cannot resist
The sounds of soft, diaphanous satin.
Our kiss. O inimitable first kiss!
Melody of sweet spontaneity.
Intoxicating and velvet abyss.
True desire; nay mere velleity.
Heavenly pleasure ‘tis this first, sweet kiss
Heart and mind will forever reminisce.
Words by K A Little 2010
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ASTOUNDING POEM ! WONDERFUL !!!!
WOW !!!!
Honestly, my time on this has been limited but is the best I could do in order to get it here without too much delay!
Thank you kind sir for the challenge. Mission complete!
Rated with hugs and memories of first kisses
^R+++
Lunchlady: It sounds like it was a lovely picture and for that I am smiling! Thank you my friend.
Linda: Thank you! I bet you would be surprised ... I only started to learn about poetry a few months back myself!
smithery: Thank you my dear friend. I am so glad you liked it.
Inspired words and emotions.
anna1liese: Love and sonnets seem to go hand in hand ... at least for me they do!
I loved this phrase - "Honeyed naivety"
patricia: Hi again! Haven't seen you for ages. I hope you're well. I'm so glad you liked this. Thank you!
trilogy: "honeyed naivety" I like too! Thanks for your kind words and for joining in on these challenges too. Stay tuned... because I think we're going to have another duel on our hands very soon! JD's asking for it!
Rita: Me too, Rita .. me too. Thank you for stopping by.
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