I breathe you in until I can no more
And savor ev’ry moment that you’re near
Breathless. Winded. Your closeness I adore
For in your sweet embrace I have no fear
I drink you in until I am replete
You fill and overflow my wanting heart
Two souls rejoice and hearts together beat
A bond beyond compare; never to part
And as we slowly dance this dance of love
And all others are but a silhouette
You draw me close; as one; like hand and glove
Then speak to me the words I’ll not forget
And in my heart they’re locked; and there they’ll stay
Forever more – until my dying day
© Words by K A Little 2011
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sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh and a huge hug for you
Sheer delight! Touchingly dear.
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"You draw me close; as one; like hand and glove"
Beautiful poetry.
sophieh: Thank you!
Patrick: Your words echo loudly for me Patrick and I thank you for that, my friend.
Robin: There is nothing more beautiful than true love. : )
Poor Woman: Your comment made me smile. I loved that you quote your favourite line. : )
mLee: It's so good to see you hear again my friend. I always keep hoping you'll stay around longer and write some more beautiful poetry. But to have you drop by always makes me smile too.
fernsy: I'm not sure if I know about love but I know what true love feels like to me ... and when I feel that kind of true love ... it takes my breath away.
catch-22: It does ... it sure does!
anna: Thank you my sweet friend.
Matt: LOL! I had to go see what you were talking about! And before or after? Well ... geez ... I don't know either!
heidibeth: Thank you! Smiling ....
Nice work. Really, really nice work.
And - hey! This poem seems a little... happier? than usual. Hmm...
And if this feeling is real for you now, then so much the better!!!
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Marty's Husband: Thank you. I live just under the Queensland border .... not very far at all. I have a daughter and son living in Queensland but apart from the recent rain they are not much affected by the floods either.
Cognitive Dissonance: Another new friend and I am glad to meet you too! I really appreciate your words here ... yes, it is indeed heartfelt.
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iq: Thank you for your beautiful comment. I really appreciate it.
Scylla: And you, my friend, are pretty grand, strong and wonderful! Well at least I picture you to be strong figure of a man so don't go and ruin it by telling me you're not!
Sounds like a safe place, a wonderful place, to be lost.
pastvoices: I'd like to think it is never too late ... that all things are possible ... that dreams can come true. I choose not to be pessimistic. Let's look on the bright side of life!
Sparking: And I appreciate your words, sweet friend. Thank you!
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