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FEBRUARY 13, 2011 2:25PM

BEAUTIFUL YOU (OC: Battle of the Sexes)

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In my heart are you –
always you
never far
always close.
You are here
in my heart
just you --
beautiful you.

On my mind are you –
always you
whispering,
talking,
laughing,
smiling.
You are here
 on my mind
just you --
beautiful you.

In my day are you –
always you
in my morning,
in my noon
in my night.
You are here
in my day
just you --
beautiful you.

Here beside me are you –
always you
holding me,
comforting me,
guiding me.
You are here
beside me
just you --
beautiful you.

 

 

 

 

 


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Big smiles, I like the four places too.r
Wonderfully written, this song of U :D
Ay I swear. I cuss. I love.
Big smiles. Gentle hugs.
What wild tame virtues.
`
Once someone said to me`
And I never forgot. I sigh.
I saw shame, pain, and sad.
It was painful to be aware.

"I really hates you" Tears.
You really blew soft kisses.
Ya know someone love Ya.
The 'hater' was lonely sad.

I hope. No 'hate' forevers.
You wing-song whispers.
Birdsong winged words.
Beautiful poem written by beautiful you.
rated with love
You are the goddess of poetry.
rated with hugs
Dear friends, I can't believe all the lovely comments already! I'm just getting ready for work (it's Monday morning here) but promise I'll be back in an hour or two to respond individually. Happy Sunday!

With love
Really, really lovely!!
Very lovely indeed...and well written and felt beyond belief!
Now I fret for the boys team...but we will see!
I want this in my life!!
That was simply fantastic!
hugs, me: I just read your poem! You have one handsome little guy there! Thank you for joining in!

Fred: Smiling here. Thank you!

tg within: Seeing you mention 'song' I looked at this and wondered if it could be put to music ... but once I started singing it in my head I quickly put that idea aside! Thank you for your kind words though! Much appreciated!
Art: "You wing-song whispers. Birdsong winged words." ... Wow! These words sing and fly softly over me . Beautiful!

RomanticPoetess: What a lovely thing to say. Thank you! That touches my heart.

Linda: LOL lovely lady! You're gonna make me blush!
Flower Child: Oh my friend ... you have touched my heart too. Thank you ... sincerely, thank you.

Satori1: Thank you so very much! I'd love it if you could join in too!

JD: Thank you. As always, written from my heart. And don't fret, friend ... go muster up the men folk ... there's some mighty fine poets amongst them! Let them know the battle is on!
Great job -- really like the first lines of each stanza and how they create a whole work in and of themselves. Excellent.
Thanks Kate..I already did..it was fun!
LL2: I want it for you too my friend. You deserve it. Love you.

heysuz: Thank you friend! How about you? I'd love it if you could join in too!

Marty's Husband: Gee, thank you so very much. I really appreciate that. What about you? Would you like to give poetry a go? I think JD is looking for some support!
Someone is cherished here!

feeling warm fuzzies.
So lovely, so beautiful, I'm sighing.
Who wouldn't love to receive a poem like that on Valentine's Day?
Blinddream: Yes. They are for sure! Warm fuzzies are good, right? : )

l'Heure Bleue: Thank you sweet lady! Love you!

Bellweather Vance: To receive such lovely comments are yours is just incredible! Thank you!
Hope your Valentine appreciates this!
Just catching up, my friend. So is this guys vs. girls love poem?
This was so beautiful - so meaningful.
Mary Ann: Me too!

Trilogy: Yes! Although we haven't decided how the winner is determined! LOL!!! I was waiting for someone to ask me that! Any suggestions? Should we determine by quantity or quality? : )
Happy Valentine's Day Down Under!
It must be just beautiful, where you are.
This is lyrical - like a song, as others have said. Such a poem overflowing with love from such a generous person. Happy Valentine's Day to you!!....R
I'd have to say quantity, because to be perfectly honest, the quality of all have been outstanding.
catch-22: Honestly, it IS beautiful here! Thank you for the lovely sentiment, catch. Much appreciated.

Michelle: Another vote for a song! You guys have me intrigued if it could be a song. Surely not! But thank you for your unbelievably kind words. They do touch my heart.

trilogy: I was thinking exactly the same thing about the quality! There are some wonderful poets here ... and all write so very differently too! It's going to be a hard one!
Angelkisses: Thank you for reading! I appreciate that you do immensely!
I have been out enjoying these picture perfect days lately Kate and am sorry to see this late.

You are the goddess of words here woman. Each line brings a big sigh here. sigh.......picture perfect poetry here too....sigh.......
Easy for you to write - you are a poetess and an artist. I enjoy all your poetry, this - no exception, by any means.
Mission: I'm so glad to hear you are well enough to be out enjoying what sound like the most wonderful of days there! Thank you for reading and be well, friend.

Fusun: You are too kind to me, Fusun! But I love you for being so!
mLee: What a beautiful picture you painted with your comment. I like that image very much! Thank you!
Like LL2, I want this too!