MAY 14, 2009 12:51PM

Haiku for a Stormy Thursday

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Sweet limpid tear’d drop

Kissing areola’s lip

Purest arcing curve

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You get the haiku trait of essence. Beautiful. Lovely.
The second line is a powerful visual. Very nice.
Intermezzo & Harp: thank you both. Haiku are easy enough to pen, but capturing an image rarely as facile. If I can leave one striking visual image, then I've been successful.