MARCH 24, 2011 6:14PM

As The Lights Go Down

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Disillusion is on the marquee. Inside the theater of the absurd it's standing room only. On stage the colors are black and white; above, the lights are strobes of imperfection illuminating the actors with disregard. From the orchestra pit, silence plays a rueful melody understood by the raucous few awaiting intermission-concession sales. I want to scream. I want to stomp. I refuse to applaud.

Center stage Pagliacci appears. His tears wash away the red-blood smile. The audience is smitten — some amused as confusion morphs the clown' s true identity. Poor Pagliacci's tenor embraces the shadows: When I am seized by madness; I don't know what I'm saying or doing! Yet, it must be!

Critics make note. Reviews are written: Great … amazing … highly rated.

Ticket sellers anticipate invisible revenue.

Producers contemplate Hollywood.

Pagliacci bows in disgrace.

Without fanfare, a second act is proffered. The audience contemplates; actors in the shadows ruminate the writer's work. There is no shortage of want. There is no precipice to fall from. There is nothing that wasn't staged before.

Center stage no one appears. The stage lights flicker. The orchestra pit empties. There is no applause. The audience retreats into the shadows. There are no bravos. There are no future acts on the marquee.

 

 

 

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I love the photo...the mistletoe which is so much more evident in winter. Your words are indeed metaphors but metaphors harkening to renewal. Life is a stage, the players are all of us. Bravo.
Chuck, color me... impaired. I can't decipher well. I want to though!
Just as: all the good books have been written, so why bother.
This is why postmodernism came & conquered, Chuck.

As a gigantically acclaimed literary critic (me) once said:
Postmodernism died because it was murdered.
It was a lovely bloody mess.
It was televised.
It still is.
That is why i am addicted to tv.

When I am seized by madness:
I don't know what I'm saying or doing! Yet, it must be!

We are currently energized by the shame of the artist's
soul-explosion. Luckily we can still localize it to him/her.

The universe works on a karmic spontaneous wavelength
that literature cannot yet achieve. OS seems to approximate it.
In the post,
and especially in the comment stream.

thanks for your voice to add to my collection.

love and theft.
Are those turkeys in that tree Chuck?
Aure has been a lot of rosting going on here for a bit..:)
rated with hugs
Figaro, my friend, figgggarrrrooooo! xox
Love your writing and the photo. Now I'll re-read and think on it a bit.
Who died and made you boss?
scanner, chuck is boss as long as he can
provide the death certificates
of the person in question
to whom you allude.

speed is of the utmost.

so is silent meditation.

chuck can give us both, if he is
willing to slay himself
in verse.

hopefully he will die soon so that
he will be able to pick up the pieces
of his past.

he not busy bein born, etc
Is this about Open Salon?
The factoring in of the Hollywood toxin. Interesting.
Photo looks like a still from Hitchcock's "The Birds."
Where is Tippi Hedron when you need her?
no bossman here in OS to which it is about
"Center stage no one appears. The stage lights flicker. The orchestra pit empties. There is no applause. The audience retreats into the shadows. There are no bravos. There are no future acts on the marquee. "

Now that's a powerful message. Zumapick.
It sounds like death to me.....not your writing, but your metaphor.
perhaps it's death from some terminal disorder
"Out, out, brief candle!
Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player,
That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,
And then is heard no more. It is a tale
Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing."
Macbeth V,v
♥R
~Into the air; and what seem'd corporal melted
As breath into the wind. Would they had stay'd! ~
beautiful
i hope you are not depressed

from a person with depression
Missed your craft, my friend. Brilliant as ever. R
Well there's a bravo for you, my friend.
I'd rather focus, for now, on the mistletoe than on the monuments beneath. Thanks for giving me the choice.
Sounds like a metaphor for my writing.
Chuck- Great writing, great pic! You're not leaving us are you?
R
So, you're using Safari now?

(Got elliptical deciphering for days, if you want it.)

It means you're supporting Barbour? Yikes.


Does anyone know how to embed Smokey & the Miracles into a comment?
My opera knowledge starts and ends with the Marx Brothers---but what this feels like IS the empty tree. The emptying out of substance, of art.
That empty tree . .like an empty marquee. "No future acts."