JUNE 8, 2011 1:23PM

hey Mr. Tambourine Man ... I ain't Sleepy

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She


she's some kind 
     of wonderful
takes me to the stars
beyond my window

she is hers
and I am mine
     together
we are what it is
  an answer
nothing to lose

        she's some kind
   of wonderful
just like a woman
tonight inside the rain
on this bumpy brass bed

she takes
she aches
she  gives
she wants
                  me
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
kloi 34 

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my eskimo pie poetry ...
You are a lucky man my friend and an excellent writer!
Reads like lyrics, Chuck. Celebrate !
♥R
aw Chuck, you make me smile with this one..
Very nice poem - kinda wonderful!
R
she must be somethin'!
she untangled my blues
she tied the laces to my shoes
she opened a book of poems
written by me
to her
yes!
What would you do for a Klondike Bar?
an answer
nothing to lose
Good words and rated with hugs
This is some kind of wonderful! I'm glad you have a muse! :)
Yeah, congratulations, Chuck.
I hope it's something in the drinking water that's
making the local nerdy writers suddenly irresistible.
Although if you tell me she "speaks like silence" and
"knows there's no success like failure/&that failure's no success at all"
I shall require her sister's number immediately. Or her daughter's.
Or her mother's. Aunt's?

" she is hers
and I am mine
together
we are what it is
an answer
nothing to lose"
tells me it's the real deal.
my wheel of fortune kicked out a vowel
local water is spirit-free soda
her silence laughs
her sisters wear baseball hats
waiting for daughters of the revolution
Sounds like all is well in that realm. So poetic.
Chuck A. Stetson. You always, without trying and effort,
make me recall`
`
You are former`
`
The Mean Mr. Mustard.
Please Behave. Ya Erotic.
If Ya do catch Poison Ivy-

Shake the gerontologist.
Shake the governor hand.
It smells like fish sardines.

See crescent Moon today.
It is crescent in thee West.
I was just gazing at a Moon.

It's like old erotic Memories.
No ask FBI to reveal Erotica.
Ask Ya gerontologist to Shake.

Share Ya poison mustard Ivies.
Go to Yale to research Flax Oil.
Shake hand with oily Mustards.

Mustard bloom is bright yellow.
No shake Michelle Obama's hand.

She shakes hand in the 'dap' style.
She's nice. No spread Ya itchy tho.

You are a Connecticut constituent.
No eat eskimo pie with nostril hair?
huh?
I mean?
Whatever?
Shave nasal hair?
or,
get mustard on nose?
or,
Grow nostril hairs to feign mustache.
Get eskimo pie on your upper lip too.
Get a Friend to communicate erotics.

Ya remind me of JME & Blind Dream.
Please?
No reveal on Blogs Erotic Fantasies?

I just a `'preaching' to mustard farmers.
You act like rural mustard neurosurgeon.

I always liked You as Mean Mr. Mustards.
Ice cream taste good with Yellow Mustard.
Just the right amount, beautiful. R
Chuck...you have become so amazing at fettering the superfluous...this sings in its emotional accuracy....xox
I enjoy the way you begin with She and end with me, then connect it all together with the thoughts in between.
R
Alla it is just fine, fine, fine.
Nothing better than listening to a man in love.~r
How lucky SHE is Chuck! Lovely poem! ;)
whats the "a"?

silk city under gloomy gray skies.
i not gloomy.

dont forget
to forget about today until tomorrow.
thoth is right. just the right amount .
never f-ing enough.ha.




she takes

she aches

she gives

she wants

me



good luck with that. i have never been
able to handle it without
making the
slightest
mis step

which led to catastrophe.
beautifully written!! Love it. Rated!