JUNE 22, 2011 4:18PM

Even a Loser wins Sometimes

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Excuse me Blues quit hanging out beside me. Stop playing your sad groove on my heartstrings — your heaviness in a flat key. I'm not going to sing your morning song. I'm no longer in your choir. There's nothing for you in me.



Many times I pray



Sometimes it ain't easy walking down Life Boulevard. A free wind charges you. Shadows avoid you. The days are years. The nights are memory riffs practiced over and over. Try to jump out of your blue suede shoes and you'll stumble. You know this don't you Blues. That's your power. That's your sin.



Your low down ways



Looking out from my bedroom I see rain puddles on the asphalt. A slight mist of confusion continues to fall. The air is heavy with dullness. Crows are preaching the Gospel of Glum. Sparrows are crying. And a humid breeze chills me. Hear me Blues: quit running round my head.

 


Life come shining



A simple twist of fate corralled me. New emotions freight-trained me. The bare rooms I hid in are now full. Inside emptiness went outside. One smile. One kiss. Within there is no more without. You look surprised, Blues. Ha, you're a master thief. You can open any emotional safe. You can open mine, but I've cashed in my sorrow.



I am released


Blues, ain't no use in calling out my name. I used to believe in you. The dawn was always dark. White was black. The end was everything. Craziness sustained me. Your melodies played me. The long lonesome road called to me. No more, Blues. Don't think twice. My reflection is dancing. Hear me, Blues, I know you well. See me Blues, I walking away from you.  

 

 

 

 

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this heaven has some good wine
Okay.. hope all is well Chuck!
Don't want you to sing the blues..
HUGGGGGG
I absolutely adore this, Chuck. Mesmerizing, familiar, victorious, glorious - you are the master word-weaver. I read it once, twice, three times, going back for more.
Love, love, love this!
R
And here I thought you and the Blues would always ride that Lost Highway together. I guess he'll have to find another rider~~
This was great and a grand job indeed for you to slip the Blues. It ain't dark yet. But it's getting there, for me. I do try though.
Rated.
A beautiful poetic journey into the blues, so glad for the walk away at the end.
Rated with love
"Crows are preaching the Gospel of Glum." Enjoyed that line very much....
just finished dancing the Zapateado with mucho muchachos
This is a nice read, fluent and beautiful. R
Poetic and I feel you are on a good path. The blues can be very seductive, but they can also come to dominate a person to the point where other (more intrinsically positive) aspects of experience are blotted out. At least, that's my view.
Keep that happy state, Chuck.
any day now ...

this is a song full of peace and you can't have me, i'm not going there. the woven lyrics are wonderful. that darkness replaced by the sunlight - nothing's better. great work, chuck.
I am glad you are happy. It makes me smile to hear your joy.
Nice to be able to listen to the blues without feeling blue.
Chuck this is one of the coolest things you've ever written. Song, poem, singing prose, not sure, but to use Blumenthal's least favorite word AWESOME!!!!!!! rrrrrrrrrr
I agree with Sheila...song lyrics indeed! Just wrote my first song in years so maybe, since the guitar is out, I'll play around with some of this.Do you have anything in meter?
yeah...every line...a marvel.
always in shuffle
or syncopated drone
maybe
I love this renouncing of the past and rejoicing in your present happiness!
r
Chuck, Scylla...Even in the darkness, some light will prevail. Eyes closed or eyes wide open, the darkness is revealing so. Dare not to dare it to close in, shed no patch of sweet, itsy bitsy patch of shimmering light in the corner. Even if only in your mind. It is there. Glowing, warming, suffering light. To bathe in. To be seen in. To find your own glow.

There are no losers. Only winners who need to take a break.
xoxo
twist in the wind
shimmy in the darkness
take my hand
and save your last dance
for me
You're not misunderstood, Chuck. The blues knows when it's defeated!
two cars parked on the overpass
rocks hit the mortar like broken glass

your style reminds me of the great one, tom petty.
me & tom have history
in the bars
in the coffee houses
i sang his lyrics
i strummed his tunes
and he
smiled
i think.
Chuck...always good to walk away from the blues...I know this place...thank you as always for capturing that sense of things so keenly...xox
Can't sing the blues in an air conditioned room!! Something like that!!

:D

Rated.
Loved this Chuck! You made me smile ;) *♥*
If you ever start singing the blues then the sky will have to change color.
I love the Blues...always will.
blues cannot but follow, hopefully at a manageable distance.
the sinking in the thorax that
all is gonna fall apart,
the center, they say,
is a black hole.

glum bum was i til the sun graced silktown yesterday &
today, with the flashing eyes on the road from strangers,
the new control of my eye muscles
fed by sol flame

eyes that tell what i am now.
ouch to move those eyes so hard at times.

The bare rooms I hid in are now full. Inside emptiness went outside. One smile. One kiss. Within there is no more without.

no more without,
externality
or
scarcity,

both meanings.
dylan in "new pony" from ach, "street legal":

"how much longer" the girls sing.

its about him shooting a horse & getting a new one.
"big hind legs" etc.

anyway, the pirate wimminz may be back, i dunno.
i hope so.
see xenolit, me, & thoth.

let's hope to scare up some wimmin power.
best way=piss em off,
i know, but i gotta be submissive.
lob to ye, lobster fella: uh, how long?
7 days til me bride arrives.

uh 7 yrs, long yrs i "had me I on ya, babe"
(need a woman...ha...damn shylock's so called christian farce")

(jesus in his room! it moved, say he)

argh. so what. daily occurence. he= fulla stories but
still aint gonna buy his sneakers or sail in a regatta
against that windwalker, i
would sink,
my luck.

cowboy vs jesus, who win?
damn g-dam ha, m-f-ing
m-fukka, as the born to be brown say
in jest committing 67 different kinda hate crimes on their crack.


crack= i did plenty in new britain. rug crawling gals all over the joint.

ha another story for ah whenever.
i see the wonderful mz. jali is among yr acquaintance-
ships. she will heal anything you are pained over.
existential enigmas, whatnot.

as for u & your situation, i hold you in my prayers
and my hugs and also my
heart, if it is true i got one.

I suspect i might.

Blood, argh.

I keep all mine inside. My blood.
i see the wonderful mz. jali is among yr acquaintance-
ships. she will heal anything you are pained over.
existential enigmas, whatnot.

as for u & your situation, i hold you in my prayers
and my hugs and also my
heart, if it is true i got one.

I suspect i might.

Blood, argh.

I keep all mine inside. My blood.