OCTOBER 12, 2011 2:31PM

the Implosion begins

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You Figure It Out


Some day you'll know I was the one
But tomorrow may rain,
so I'll follow the sun …


nothing i can say
nothing that i do
it's over
she's gone
her heart and soul
returned
perhaps never given
who am i to say




Mr. Moonlight come again please
here I am on my knees
begging if you please


she is hurting
i can't sleep
she's out cold
dreaming in her ambiguity
about me?
no ... those dreams have faded

so detox love it is
a painful parting it must be
for me, i don't know about her
but in this darkness
her shadow within arms length
i await the next craving
there is no cure
each breath is agony
there is no cure
there is no cure
each breath is agony
she is the cure
dreaming in her ambiguity



let me hear you say 
the words i want to hear
words of love
whispered soft and true 

distant train
your whistle calls
but i can't respond
not this trip
my fears are realized
distant train
blow your whistle for another
switch tracks
and go


Well how come you say you will when you won't,
Say you do, baby, when you don't?
Let me know honey how you feel,
Tell the truth now, is love real? 


hold me
love me?
eight days a week doesn't exist

hold you
love you?
there aren't enough days to show I care

hold me 
love me
your always on my mind
 
 
Well honey don’t, well honey don’t,
A little little honey don't,
A-say you will when you won't, uh huh honey, don't. 

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there's no fun in what i do if ...
What a great open call, I missed this one.
Wonderful poem around those lovely words.
rated with love
now i find you've changed your mind
treat me like you did the night before
where you telling lies
was i so unwise
“Do you love me, or are you just extending goodwill?
Do you need me half as bad as you say, or are you just feeling guilt?
I've been burned before and I know the score
So you won't hear me complain.
Will I be able to count on you
Or is your love in vain?’’ (zimmerman)
Go to the anti-love songs.

“Are you so fast that you cannot see that I must have solitude?
When I am in the darkness, why do you intrude?
Do you know my world, do you know my kind
Or must I explain?
Will you let me be myself
Or is your love in vain?”

……………………………………
Implosion is serious business & must be done right;
to a black hole…
that’s the way to the new universe, all physics geeks know that.
here i stand head in hand
my face towards the wall
she'll be gone
and i'll carry on
feelin' two foot small
Hoping for the "fiction" tag, my friend.
better run through the jungle
out my back door
oh boy
imagination is doing cartwheels
no happy creatures
are playing in the band.
Chuck...great stuff.......but....fiction???

I've been on a Beatles binge lately....early Beatles....
me oh my oh
my sweetest one
sun of a gun
it's a fillet gumbo
fruit jar
no gayo
the place ain't buzzin'
i musta been wrong
there be more than for ways to get unraveled
I figured it out, and I am truly sorry.

Lezlie
The sun comes up
In a coffee cup
Waitress please I've had enough
Lord I can't believe what I see
How can I be alone
very well done
hope thing get better for you
Love is a sort of suicide, my friend...
I missed these Chuck, hope these are artistic and not autobiographic.. I like the interposition of the lyrics. Sadly lilting.