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Poetry: the best words in the best order.

M. C. S.

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FEBRUARY 16, 2012 7:43PM

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Passion and love I remember

your name branded into my being

the moment you left

 

Now and then I return to that scene

you couldn’t look me in the eye

your spoken words were mumbled

 

I asked you to stay

you had places too see

I was too young you said

 

You couldn’t wait

at twenty one

what was the rush

 

At nineteen

my life wasn’t that small

you could have waited

 

You walked away

dusted with the first winter snow

leaving me in the cold

circleoflife

 

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Returning to a place like that is difficult. You might consider avoiding this experience.
Patrick Frank
February 16, 2012 08:16 PM
Your words always warm my heart. If others can't see this, feel this, it truly is THEIR loss.
MichelleD
February 16, 2012 09:36 PM
Oh, you can't avoid this. I would have to shut myself in a dark room to get away from all the heartache. Embrace it and gain strength. I know you do.
zanelle
February 16, 2012 10:02 PM
I hope you have better memories that will warm you in company. I understand the sadness in such partings.
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FusunA
February 17, 2012 05:28 PM