A flower petal
silky to the touch
foggy morning light
Soft gentle breathing
of the one so loved
mild winter afternoon
The shape of his mouth
catches the eye
moth to flame
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M. C. S.'s Blog
Poetry: the best words in the best order.
M. C. S.
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- For me writing is the best way to talk without ever being interrupted.................................. ©2012, M.C.S. - all rights reserved
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Comments
of the one so loved..
a totally tactile experience, with all the senses
bowing to the sense of Touch.
inside Touch.
Thanks Mary...
love, Liz
The first two parts have a power in the use of three words that go together without being connected by ancillary words. It might be a complete poem, in craft as well as evocation, if the last line were built in the same fashion, perhaps replacing the unnecessary word, “to”, with a more direct emotive word such as, “loving”, “Daring”, or “Caressing”