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M. C. S.

M. C. S.
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For me writing is the best way to talk without ever being interrupted.................................. ©2013, M.C.S. - all rights reserved

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APRIL 21, 2012 11:36AM

Distant Rustling

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Those now gone

have a way of drifting

through our minds

these moments carry like

the sound of rustling old papers

this sound is hushed

but carries untold distances

often I wake in this house

to that very sound

at times I believe

you have something to

tell me

is that so

I lie still and wait

believing I feel you near

time is rushing me by

yet I wait

the ticking hands of the clock

have rob me of my youth

reason tells me to move on

however my heart is anchored

to what we had

in these early hours

I miss you

raw and painful

like the moment

I was told you were gone

do you miss me

now here we are

neither here nor there

circleoflife 

 

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This touched me in a place I have been many times and never could express. I used to wake up every night at 3AM and knew he was in the room with me. I tried so hard to listen and hoped he would speak.
I finally learned how to talk to him and now I can ask him anything and he will tell me what I need to hear.
I am truly touched by this lovely poem
rated with love
So personal and so telling of how it is to have someone gone from you. You pain is recognizable, but there is another beam too, which is remembrance.
This makes me think about personal losses and stirrs similar feelings. It hurts. Part of me does have a hard time moving on, or maybe it is an impossibility to move on compleyely when someone you have cared about deeply is gone...
I so understand this. r
"neither here nor there"
I understand this so well. i love the way you can express these feelings in ways so many of us can't, Mary. Lovely.
Such longing in your beautifully crafted words. R