Chelle's Mid-life musings

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MichelleD

MichelleD
Location
St. Charles, Illinois, USA
Birthday
January 17
Title
Supervisor, Anatomic Pathology Department
Company
Edward Hospital
Bio
I am a career oriented woman, who just retired from 20 years of active duty service in the military. I now work in a civilian hospital, and recently completed my MBA in Healthcare management. I enjoy writing, cooking, running, and above all spending as much time possible with my family.

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JANUARY 28, 2012 1:22AM

Time to say goodbye, for now...

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Please don’t tell me

“Oh you’ll be ok”

Because I already know I will surpass the distance

That drives a wedge between us

Please don’t tell me

“The time will go by fast”

Because a minute without you

Is like a down pour of rain

Without the rainbow to encompass

The storm

Shedding light, color, and warmth

Amongst the cold

Quite possibly

I am alone on an island

Stranded and in solitude

Without you

If only for a short amount of time

My breath will now catch in my throat

For the words needed to be spoken

Are left without an ear

Or a shoulder to understand and feel what I am feeling

At this very moment

I will pray for rainbows

And sunshine

To warm the cold and somber feeling

That embraces my heart

and the other half

of my soul

that resides

geographically

so

far away.

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Passionate, and honest.
Thanks, Patrick....
The hardest thing is to have the "other half of your soul so far away"
What a lovely love poem!
rated with love
beautiful and wonderful...simply that...r
Beautiful, honest, and real. R~
For the words needed to be spoken

Always.. honesty is the best in everything.
HUGGGGGGGG
Beautifully written. Glad to find you --

"My breath will now catch in my throat

For the words needed to be spoken

Are left without an ear

Or a shoulder to understand and feel what I am feeling"

This especially, I so understand....
Your on a roll with the poetry my friend! That island and rain certainly made the words flow!
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We can be your rainbow, Michelle, for a while. Yours and your husband's sacrifice are for us, of course, and it's the least we can do. I hope your weekend is storm free.
Your opening really grabbed me! So, often well-intentioned friends use this phrase and it can feel so dismissive. It is much healthier to acknowledge and walk through the darkness. I too have lived a time in my life where I felt every painful minute of loss...it doesn't pass quickly...but it does pass. Very expressive!
Thank you all for such wonderful comments...
Matt, I may take you up on that, I'll need extra rainbows while he is gone...
Emotionally moving, very nice.
The way this starts, I really loved this. So moving.r
Thanks so much HUGS..love your name!
This is an impressive write...not just the words or structure....but the emotion you carry so well with it.
A pleasure to read.
what hugs said. The opening two lines set the tone very nicely- I find myself wanting to tell you, but you know...
Sometimes, it is nice to hear..thanks db...
Please don’t tell me
“Oh you’ll be ok”


The emotion in your plea I feel deeply. The emotion throughout just grabs my heart and squeezes.

Michelle, you've expressed so beautifully and so touchingly, the ache of long distance love. Well done.

Sending love and good wishes.
amazing line:
"My breath will now catch in my throat

For the words needed to be spoken

Are left without an ear"


then throat throbs to say things it cannot.
you can actually FEEL throat
articulate what cannot
be communicated..
Thanks, Little Kate!
James, thanks for reading/commenting. Means the world (everyone!)!!
A beautiful description of the pain of separating. Thanks for writing this!
Diane
Thank YOU, Diane, for your beautiful comment and reading.