Moana

Moana
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India
Birthday
March 16
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A writer who has to write JAVA code for a living but dreams of someday reaching the elysium where letters would be all that she would need to exist.

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JUNE 10, 2011 7:24AM

Flash Fiction - The Copier Machine

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She loved her cubicle. It was right next to the copier machine. She loved seeing all the people who came to copy, scan, print or just fix a jam.

 

She played out stories in her head about all of them. Hushed conversations on cellphones, snatched bits of office gossip shared over the whir of the machine added spice to the narratives.

 

He came to the machine for the first time on his second day in the office. He caught her sneaking looks at him. He smiled, just to be nice, she turned her face the other way. He did not take offence, he knew she was discomfited.

 

But it was too late for him, he had seen her eyes, her lips pursed in concentration, the dimples on her chin, her hair curling all around her face.

 

She was surprised he had seen her watching him. No one ever noticed her. She looked up only when his retreating back was visible over the top of her monitor.

 

He started coming everyday. He never looked her way. She never turned to watch him. But he always caught her profile while turning to walk away. She always looked out for his retreating back over her monitor.

 

Then one day he didn’t come. She waited. He was absent the next day. She was curious. He stayed away for a week. She was anxious. She went through the discarded papers at the machine. No clues.

 

She looked out for the familiar back at the cafeteria, during walks through the office, in the elevators, in the reception, in the subway, on the streets, in her dreams….

 

Two weeks after the last time the back had vanished beyond the range of her monitor, she gave up. She stayed home to mourn the end of her affair.

 

Next day she took her seat in the cubicle beside the machine. Her screen had a post it stuck to it smack in the middle.

 

It had a name and a number

 

…….and a sketch of the machine.

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This was great! So much said, so few words~
Thanks Scanner. Loved your piece so your comment means a lot.
A great portrayal of taking the small details quite seriously. I love the romance of him leaving the sketch of the copier. Nicely done!
Thnx catch_22. That copier sketch was a last minute detail. Sort of an afterthought. Glad it worked.
Boy you had me going. I thought the romance had run out of ink along with the copier! Nice, tight story!
R
the office tango!

well framed and hung for all to see. :)
Outonalimb and Blinddream, thank you so much.
Heh, I think 70-80% of office romances are just like this: constant catching of the eye, peaking at one another, pretending there's more heat, less heat then there is, wondering if it's all in your head . . . the post-it note ending is rare, though, in real life. Nice touch.
Hahaha! Great ending. This was such a great story about playing hard to get!!
R
Seth, the ending was what we all wish the ending will be...isn't it..

Susie...I am so glad you got it.
Intriguing indeed.... And I love how you said it all in so few words!
I love the build-up of an imaginary "affair" and a dream-come-true, unexpected ending. Well done !
♥R
Just loved it! So sympathetic a character in such a tight focus. We all know this person. And we all know this copier.
Alysa..sometimes you find romance in the most ordinary and dull circumstances.

Fusun..Thank you and the dream ending is what separates fiction from non fiction.

ASH The most intriguing stories are what we live out each day even though we may not realise it at the time.