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NOVEMBER 12, 2009 10:48AM

Sex and Love Chiarascuro (poetry thursday)

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 Goya_Maja_naga2

naked maja 

Francisco Goya 

 

 

you can call me old fashioned I do

I bear my breasts my heart my soul

I shout out to the heavens and gods and winged angels

loving love and you

 

once a free spirit

hip loins, cool

now a foolish goober

a big assed ass

chiaroscuro

when it comes to lamouro

 

like that love

love the lovelove those wires

sizzling and our connectors 

sympatically seasonally seasoning

no somatics here 

we’re in IT

up to our hips

compelled to move possess

heat like a brick oven like the sun like lava pouring forth and up 

warm ha! hot

wet to the core

warning:

I burn.will burn

that’s my price

I will toast those kernels

and pop your husk

 

move to the feeling grove to the reeling

for this more than sensation

take the connection straight up from

the source of my heart my heat my soul to yours

come

dance

the water’s like silk 

 

this is not to say

when I feel the lure I

am chaste white and sugarsweet no no no, notatall

I will fuck like no tomorrow

there is a no tomorrow

more than a memory

wet stain on my bed

there is today now and tomorrow too

contradiction? o yes

loving love I love you

 

 

 

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a bump isn't always a bump
sometimes it's

a bump
Foolish Monkey
November 12, 2009 10:50 AM
Nice! I can imagine this as "spoken word" art.
Owl_Says_Who
November 12, 2009 11:10 AM
Whoa! I read this thee times (not until a moment ago did I know what chiaroscuro meant). This is just so good and hot the computer screen is foggy. You do this so well!!
R~~
scanner
November 12, 2009 11:11 AM
owl, thanks. you think so? I don't know what it is. it just kind of jumps out and fills a page. thank you again.

scanner...thank you. I know you love poetry so that is high praise for me.
Foolish Monkey
November 12, 2009 11:21 AM
A brilliant emotion that crescendos beautifully. I see no contrast in how you love. ~R~
Chuck A. Stetson
November 12, 2009 11:54 AM
::laughing::

I'm a mess a mass of contrasts and questions and questionablity.

thank you chuck.
Foolish Monkey
November 12, 2009 12:01 PM
Okay this was GOOD. I don't know beans about poetry, but I know what I like....I LIKE this.

Rated.
David McClain
November 12, 2009 12:02 PM
well mr. I don't know beans torman, I am just tickled that you liked it. I so much love writing poetry. and it makes me so happy when people I like (and respect) like it too. thank you.
Foolish Monkey
November 12, 2009 12:06 PM
:::big smile:::

BL4: I wish I could do my excellent Barry Fitzgerald imitation for you so I could say "I DO", as he did in The Quiet Man.

I do have a poets heart. I hope I am getting better at expressing it. So *I do* so thank you.
Foolish Monkey
November 12, 2009 01:53 PM
This was straight from the hips, honey! Well done.
Rated and now favorited.
65 AndStillAlive
November 12, 2009 02:07 PM
you've made me smile broadly 65 AndStillAlive and for that I thank you.
Foolish Monkey
November 12, 2009 03:28 PM
Nice use of chiaroscuro! Naked Maya shows it all, your poem tells us more. I enjoyed reading it several times. Remember, real men (or women) love big asses.
Rated
rainee174
November 12, 2009 03:30 PM
I loved this! Hot and steamy - poetic eroticism at it's best.
Smithery
November 12, 2009 03:34 PM
rainee: yes! we are a bigass household. forever making ass jokes. i'm so glad you enjoyed my poem and goya's magnificent maja. she is something, isn't she? thank you so much.

smithery: I'm glad you liked it. I hope I made my husband blush. (big grin)
Foolish Monkey
November 12, 2009 04:36 PM
Chiaroscuro. Wonderful word. Should've made it a refrain in this poem. Chiaroscuro. Everybody, say it with me: chiaroscuro.
BOKO
November 12, 2009 05:11 PM
BOKO: I like it...it sounds like a song!
chiaroscura!
look in the mirra
Foolish Monkey
November 12, 2009 05:51 PM