Foolish Monkey

Foolish Monkey
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*************************** the image above is utter foolishness. *************************** WARNING: what you read at noon is NEVER the same poem or post a few hours later. I can't help myself. I like to noodle. HELPFUL SUGGESTION: if you like what you've read (and even if you didn't), come back in a day or two. It'll be better. In fact, if you hated it, you must come back and read it again because it will definitely be better. *************************** "I find that I am so excited I can barely sit still or hold a thought in my head. I think it's the excitement only a free man can feel, a free man at the start of a long journey whose conclusion is uncertain" -Red in The Shawshank Redemption, Stephen King ***************************

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FEBRUARY 8, 2010 2:58PM

child of storms: poetry

Rate: 13 Flag

through frost

a girl sees the face of her father

it is long and very white

a massive trunk

knots of muscles stacked

no rhyme or reason

a man none the less

in his terrible flesh storms

fear is thunder swirling in clouds

black in his pockets

 

this child, this one rare child will turn

and look to a narrow chasm of light

dazzling ruby red her horizon for some somewhere

she takes my breath away

 

and through  and here

she goes and comes

grows and thrives a child of light

a persistant child

I wonder sometimes who she is this sinewy creature

an elusive mouse

I give her crusts and make idle promises

in return she sings a gift

in time to flight and fancy

dreams

we are a dream

only now

live with me and sing

sing with me and dance

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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in his terrible flesh storms

"fear is thunder swirling in clouds

black in his pockets"

Now *that* is frightening, like a surreal painting. What is it about this Monday?
I don't know...I wrote it last week.

(laughing)
Yes. A dream--but one that sings and dances.
Rock on, monkey . . . rock on . . .
I'm dancing as fast as I can Owl.
You keep dancing if it keeps you writing like this! :)
Psyche, Thank you. I will keep tippytapping on my keyboard. I think I like poetry better than anything. Except maybe wacky women fiction. but I think that's poetry too.

Thank you.
Great!
I love your poetry, always beautifully written and powerful.
rated
Mical,
Thank you so much.
o thank god for you today - the place has gone mad

close your eyes ...
I want to rate this a thousand hundred times.
Wow. I do like Monkey. Yup.
I do.
I could read many more of these if you would write them here.......
Always love your poetry - it's so magical.
Rated.
I broke down and began to weep tragically at "in his terrible flesh storms." I think I'll sleep in tomorrow.... (r)
Monkey... you make me dance and sing, even at this early hour.
being of the storm makes you strong ~
kim,
thank you for your kind words. but OH NO...once again, I missed something. I always miss all the fun and madness. it's the time differences, I'm sure of it.

mission,
thank you. (maybe we can rig something up with the ratings. hahah)

unbreakable,
your words make me feel good. thank you.

clarkk,
I'm sorry to hear you've collapsed. try a nice slice of cake. that'll straighten you right out!

ck dexter,
yer just a natural vaudevillian, is what you are.

mother,
yes it does. hello mother! thank you.