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MARCH 28, 2009 10:56AM

How she learned to love spinning wheels - Part 2

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 Here's part two of the series and sequel to my B.M.O.C.  post.  Thanks to everyone who has been reading thus far and hopefully to new readers as well:

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“Dr. Morris, step aside.  Take the patient to OR1, Dr. Stinson”. barked the attending physician, Dr. Jones.   September stepped back as if she were in a fog.  She was dizzy, but made it to a stool before she lost control of her bearings.  One of the residents kneeled down in front of her.  “Are you feeling, ok?  What happened?”  Immediately, she snapped out of it “The man that they brought in from the crash….where is he?  Where did they take him?” she asked in a panic. “Calm down, September.  He’s stable, they are working on him right now.”  “Well, I’ve got to go see…..”  “Oh, no you don’t.  Dr. Jones will have your hide if you step into that OR in this condition.  It’s better if you just stay put.”

Try as she might, she couldn’t get that face out of her mind.  Yes, it had been ten years but it seemed that he had hardly aged a day.  Sure, his precious bloody face was more defined and his hair was closely cropped with no traces of that beautiful fro left, but it was most certainly him

“Just a second” she said as she rushed to catch the paramedics who brought him to the ER.  “Could you tell me what happened to the man that you just brought in?” 

“Well, doc, we received a call indicating that he had been struck while crossing at Barrett Parkway and Highway 41.  We determined that he sustained two broken legs and suffered internal bleeding, nothing life threatening but his spinal cord may have been compromised.  Classic case of hit and run”

“Was the driver apprehended?”

“No ma’am, not as far as we know.”

“C’mon, Bruce.  We’ve got another call.”

“Ok, thanks so much……”

How could this be happening?  She had to see him; to make sure that he’d be ok.  She ran to the observation room to watch as they began to work on him.  It was the longest five hours of her life.  She never moved from that room.  She wanted to be there regardless of the outcome.  It was only after she was certain the surgery was successful that she stepped out into the hallway where she noticed a young woman crying inconsolably. 

“Doctor!” she cried out as soon as she saw September through her incessant tears.  “Please tell me how he is doing?!” 

“Who is the patient, ma’am?” she asked in a very still voice so that she could calm the frantic woman and perhaps her own fragile nerves.

“Billy…..his name is Billy Walsh”  “I’m……..”

September gulped…..of course.  She was ashamed.  She was so busy making plans for their future; she never considered he already had one.  Why would she assume that he wouldn’t go on with his life, that he would wait….for her?  She really began to question her sanity.  Had she allowed an old school girl crush to keep her from seeing….from living in reality? 

“Yes, he just got out of surgery.  The surgeon will be with you shortly to talk with you.   Please, just wait right here.”

She couldn’t walk away fast enough.  She took deep breaths and wished that the ground would swallow her whole.  “How could I have wasted so much time living a fantasy life?” she thought as she reached the safe confines of the Doctor’s lounge.  She scrambled around her jacket pocket for loose change for the pay phone.  “Terry….can you meet me for lunch in the hospital cafeteria?”   “Yes, I know it’s short notice, but I would never ask if it wasn’t absolutely necessary.  One hour?  Ok, thanks.”  She hung up the phone and went to find her attending to see if she still had a job.

She pulled open the door and exited the lounge.  As she turned the corner, she saw Dr. Jones speaking to the young woman who had calmed down quite considerably.

 “Ah, yes.  Dr. Morris, this is Ms. Walsh.” 

“Hello.  I’m sorry to about what happened to your hus……”

“No, don’t be.  Dr. Jones has already explained that while he’s pretty banged up, he’s going to be fine.  I was so afraid of losing him; he means so much to me.  I’m very happy to finally meet you.  I had no idea…that is…until Dr. Jones mentioned that you knew Billy and when she told me your name…..wow.” she said as Dr. Jones excused herself and walked away.

September was as confused as a circus clown at a Mensa meeting.  “I’m sorry…..he talked about me….to you, I mean…...”

“Of course!  My brother had the biggest crush on you!  He never stopped talking about ‘the girl who got away’.  Oh, maybe I’m saying too much!” she offered wondering if she actually had.

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A comedy of errors! The art of misunderstandings. Excellent.

Rated.
Onecorgilover, I will second Trudge164's comment above! As you know, after reading the first installment that preceded this I had an ominous feeling about the prospects for Billy.
Man!! OMG!! I hope he is okay.. You have me waiting and wanting to know what happens next. I am so glad it was his sister and not his wife. It is cool that neither one ever forgot the "One who got away".
Beautiful story. Excellent..
I am liking this a LOT. I can't offer writing comments but i can surely offer reader comments and as a reader I am hooked.! I am a sucker for a good romance.
Great post OCG. I used to live right off of Barrett Pkwy and Hwy 41!
What a small, small world...

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Exactly! Thanks, Trudge!

D, I'm glad that you liked the twist...lol

FE, that is so true....no matter how many years have passed, you always wonder 'what if?'

Thanks, Ariana! Your kind words of encouragement is greatly appreciated.

KOB, I couldn't think of a street in Nawlins.....so I took the cheap and easy way out and used an intersection that I am quite familiar with in the Kennesaw/Marietta area....lol.
I'm very curious to see how this ends, you've got me hooked.
(I guess a lot of people are getting back together with old flames at reunions now.)
Ah ha!! See what happens when we assume? Excellent twist, Corgi! Sweet!
Ps, I saw a guy walking two corgis today and immediately thought of you. Funny, huh?
Thanks, Kathy! Glad to see that the story has you hooked.....that was all a part of my diabolical plan you know! ;-D I've decided to post the rest of the story every other day, so the next installment is tomorrow. I have six installments in all. I said it was long....lol.

Mike, you are so lucky to have seen those darlings....I probably would have scooped them up and taken them home with me.....but I'm weird like that.
YES ~ what trudge said ... now I'm going to read III again ~

I've dedicated my whole morning to you!!! and it's so worth it!!!
Oh, thanks Ann!! You're such a dear!
I intentionally waited to read this one till the Part 3 was up. I hate Waiting!

I'm enjoying poor Dr. Morris's tangled affairs of the heart.
this is fun, sweetheart. you made a lot of changes and it reads much faster and more smoothly. just two picky things: she watched the surgery for 5 hours??? how? wasn't her pager going off during the whole thing? there has to be some accuracy too if you're going to give her this job. but i'm sure no one else noticed because this is so fun. you say later that she checks to see if she's still got a job. and why would he have only bruises if he had surgery for 5 hours? need a little clarificatino here, reminder of why he was in surgery. if you did that, never mind. i've got painbody mediation tomorrow and a fever today and my mind is fucked. also, i love the "like a circus clown at a mensa meeting" but a clown isn't necessarily stupid. you could say george bush or sometihng else but doesn't matter.

very very good job at streamlining this. love love love and gratitude.
Practically Shakespearean in its twists and turns. And I must comment on your turn of phrase here: "... confused as a circus clown at a Mensa meeting..." Love it!! Heading over to Part 3 now.
Thanks, Connie!!

Teddy, I did think of this, but without expounding on it, we can assume that her attending gave her special dispensation because she knew the guy. I should have included that but was concerned that it was much too long in the first place. I will try to deftly include such crucial items moving forward.

Oh, the clown comment....no I wasn't calling her stupid....she was confused by what the sister was saying. I am willing to bet though that most clowns would feel slightly discombobulated in a room full of geniuses....but that could just be my bias. Excellent, excellent comments, Teddy.....you always give me great food for thought!!

Thanks, DCV for your continued support. Much appreciated as always!
Good and I'm moving on to III.
Continues to entice with the promise of more twists to come. Very nice - moving on to Part 3!
Thanks, Pam and Duane....you guys are real troopers!