P. Orin Zack's Blog

Topical Short Stories: massage into brain, repeat as needed

P. Orin Zack

P. Orin Zack
Location
Renton, Washington, US
Birthday
June 22
Bio
Ever since I learned to speak binary on a DIGIAC 3080 training computer, I've been involved with tech in one way or another, but there was always another part of me off exploring ideas and writing about them. Halfway to a BS in Space Technology at Florida Institute of Technology during the Apollo years, I ditched out and walked into a data center job with Franklin National Bank a few years before it made history. Software contract houses, like the one I signed up with after the layoff, not only offered paid benefits, but kept paying you between contracts while they searched for your next gig. Of course, by then, I'd already been infected with the ideas of Edward de Bono, so my approach to problem solving, and therefore every part of my life, including writing, was tacking towards uncharted territory. Since then, I've worked on a remote weather station for NOAA and on NASA/JPL's Deep Space Network, diddled with a huge database for a DOD competition at what used to be McDonnell-Douglas, subverted the design of the database driving one of the Air Force's aircraft test sets, wrote tech docs in the 'Dead Languages Group' at Microsoft, and even created the entire IT infrastructure for a manufacturing business I co-owned. And all along the way, I wrote. So far, there's three novels, as well as lots of short stories and essays. Some of which you can read right here

What have you meekly acquiesced to, and then regretted it?  (This series began with "Crossing the Line".)

“Representation”
by P. Orin Zack
[4/8/2013]

“And finally,” Sue Winston said, scanning the agenda on her screen, “we have a request for a zoning change. Jones… Read full post »

What have you meekly acquiesced to, and then regretted it?  (This series began with "Crossing the Line".)

“Scaling K2”
(Part 3 of a series)
by P. Orin Zack
[12/11/2012]

“Yeah, yeah, yeah,” Les said, holding a splayed hand up for respite. “You’ve made your po… Read full post »

What does it take to spur you into action? (This series began with "Crossing the Line".)

“Making it Count”
(Part 2 of a series)
by P. Orin Zack
[9/30/2012]

“Holy crap,” 11-year-old Kendrik Knox whispered excitedly. As his dropped spoon hit the cereal bowl, he reached for the… Read full post »

Are you confident enough to speak truth to power?  [Note: I blogged the process of developing this story idea.]

“Crossing the Line”
by P. Orin Zack
[9/24/2012]

Central District City Councilwoman Sue Winston dropped her ever-present smile and nervously glanced around the shared offi… Read full post »

AUGUST 31, 2012 7:11PM

Story-prep 4: Setting the Stage

In my last three posts, (Confidence Vampires, Grounding a Vampire, and Death by Inches,) I transformed the idea presented in a recent academic paper -- that people become overconfident because social norms of politeness prevent others from giving negative social feedback -- into the basis for a sh… Read full post »

AUGUST 7, 2012 8:26PM

Story-prep 3: Death by Inches

If you've been following along, you know that the story idea that burrowed into my head a few days ago wants me to show a Confidence Vampire intent on preying upon an Occupy being thwarted. As metaphor, it exposes the internal struggle you'd have between stifling yourself and speaking… Read full post »

AUGUST 6, 2012 9:24PM

Story-prep 2: Grounding a Vampire

Discovering the idea that wants to bury itself in your next story is one thing. Figuring out how to grow that story around it is something else again. The question this time was how to show the internal conflict between feigning polite acquiescence to an act of… Read full post »

AUGUST 5, 2012 3:21PM

Story-prep 1: Confidence Vampires

Damn. They always seem so innocent at first, don't they? Playful, even. But we both know how insidious they can be, and how easily they can turn your world inside-out. It's not a pretty sight, either. And there's nowhere to hide. No matter what you do, no matter… Read full post »

JULY 23, 2012 2:09PM

Meta-level Show Don't Tell

Show. Don't tell. So much wisdom in so few words. And yet, there's still more than one way to understand them.

I'd accepted the offer to attend the Pacific Northwest Writers Association Conference last week for the synchronicity of it, not because I had a manuscript to pitch… Read full post »

JULY 20, 2012 1:06PM

Unexpected Conference

People blog for lots of reasons. Mine was to set my subversive short stories free so they could find whatever readers needed the ideas peeking out from behind those streams of words. It was a conscious decision. I could either tuck my stories away while pitching them, one… Read full post »

JUNE 1, 2012 4:45PM

Short Story: "The Keeper's Tale"

In the mid-1970s, a friend of mine did something to my head that I will never forget. She was one of those very rare people who sometimes stepped aside and let another speak through her. Some call this 'channeling', and wrap the experience in mystery. For her,Read full post »

MAY 28, 2012 11:35AM

Short Story: "Stage Fright"

“Stage Fright”
by P. Orin Zack
[5/21/2012]

“Pardon me for asking, Mr. Welch, but you’re not having stage fright, are you?”

Feeling very alone in the empty limo, Evers Welch gazed through the darkened window at the big display over the row of doors across the street. P… Read full post »

APRIL 25, 2012 11:01PM

Short Story: "Hot Seat"

“Hot Seat”
by P. Orin Zack

Audrey Fine pulled her gaze back from the grime-filtered lights of the city’s warehouse district beyond the wire-veined window, and nervously checked her watch. One twenty-eight AM. Another two minutes. “I hope Rhiannon’s alright.&rd/… Read full post »

One of the things I like about OpenSalon is that it not only welcomes people to blog their fiction, it also solicits stories through the OS Weekend Fiction Club. That's why I've blogged so many of my short stories here, including several that expand the world I created in my… Read full post »

Everyone gets job burnout at one time or another, but what if you didn't recover from it? What if nobody did?

Freelance writer Melanie Stroub was happily trashing webevangelist Wilfred McQuarry’s weekly rant about angels when she got it, and ended up fixated on angels. It was like… Read full post »

Book Cover If government field agents had temporal intelligence tech, how would pre-emptive ops be carried out? What would they look like? Angela Pascoe may have found out. She’s a psychic Healer from Australia, and she’s noticed a rash of unusual accidents among patients referred to a… Read full post »

This is the story that several recent posts have been about. If you compare the sections I included there, you can see the sort of editing that I do before declaring a story finished. It is the second in what has become a series that began withRead full post »

APRIL 10, 2012 1:44PM

On Drug-Enhanced Soldiers

My writing owes a great deal to current events, because I frequently build them from an idea or a problem that’s brought out in the course of reporting on something in the news. But those ideas and problems return again and again, which is why blogging short stories… Read full post »

APRIL 6, 2012 1:58PM

Genesis of a Story: Part 5

As an experiment in exposing my writing process to view, I've been posting my notes and prose here as I work on a sequel to my previous new short story, "Unspoken", which was instigated by the posts of an OpenSalon blogger from India. One thing that I… Read full post »

APRIL 3, 2012 8:58PM

Genesis of a Story: Part 4

I've been using this space to show the process I go though when developing a new short story. If you came here first, you might want to backtrack a bit to catch up.

So far, I've sketched out the opening situation of a follow-up to my recent story… Read full post »

APRIL 3, 2012 8:57PM

Genesis of a Story: Part 3

As an experiment, I've been posting my notes as I work towards writing my next short story. (There are over 100 of them posted here.) It's a follow-up to "Unspoken", the last new story I wrote and uploaded. In that story, a call-center worker named Rahila is… Read full post »

APRIL 3, 2012 8:55PM

Genesis of a Story: Part 2

Continuing with this experiment, I'm posting notes about the development of a new story while I'm working on it.

Staging: At what point do we dip into the action? We want to give the reader some context at the start, so the attack could happen while a member of… Read full post »

APRIL 3, 2012 8:53PM

Genesis of a Story: Part 1

I've decided to try something different, today. Instead of waiting until my next story is finished before posting it, I'd like to show you how it happens by exposing the creative process as I go through it. The last new story that I posted, "Unspoken",  was inspired by… Read full post »

MARCH 4, 2012 5:06PM

"Red Queen at Morning"

Red Queen at Morning
A 4-Part Metaphysical Adventure

By
P. Orin Zack

Part 1: Red Queen at Morning

People sometimes get so wrapped up in the need for their answers to be right that they lose sight of the need for them to be useful. The ancient system… Read full post »

“Unspoken”
[1/20/2012]
by P. Orin Zack

“And that’s all there is to it?” the gravelly voice in Rahila’s earpiece chortled.

“That’s right, Mr. Preston.  I’m glad I could help.”

“And I’m glad,” he said earnestly, “… Read full post »