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Patrick Frank

Patrick Frank
Location
Asheville, North Carolina, USA
Birthday
September 26
Bio
I am a poet-essayist-singer-songwriter, and advocate for the poor, with a teaching and counseling background. I grew up in Florida, now live in Arden, North Carolina. I also lived in New England 20 years. I love nature, music, and poetry. I am married and we have three adult-kids between us and four grandkids! I am interfaith, leaning toward Taoist, Celtic, and Native American spirituality, and an "Obama Democrat." I am now focusing on our upcoming move (within Asheville) as well as my music and poetry-writing. I also continue to write political columns.

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FEBRUARY 2, 2012 7:22PM

Back to the Corridor of Shame (poetry, w/part 2, repost)

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"I am not worried about the very poor"

Mitt Romney 

 

back in rural South Carolina

at the Super 8 Minit Mart

 

Crack dealers and pimps hang

out beneath the no loitering sign

 

I sidle past them

trying to look tough

but I'm not afraid

 

I'm dressed in tattered shorts

and tee shirt, unshaven, wearing

my Clemson baseball cap

 

I have a few dollars

crumpled in my pocket

 

It's gonna be a long night

in Lake City. we'll stay double locked

in our motel room

 

up and down Route 52

you see old black men

riding bikes

 

they can't afford a car

 

 the despair is palpable

even the Walmart has closed

their building

 

is an empty tomb

this is the Corridor

of Shame

 

we pass fields

that used to be

plantations

 

we have traveled back

but now we leave again

 

headed for the ocean

glad to be leaving

 

but feeling guilty

leaving these folks

behind

 

back to the Super 8 Minit Mart

at five am. As I leave the motel

 

walk across the parking lot

the air is cold and clean

 

bird cries fill the air

in this one-horse

 

Southern town. The pimps

and drug dealers have packed

up and left the scene

 

I walk across to the Super 8

Minit Mart to buy a cup

 

of java.  Inside, there is an old lady

at the cash register looking drained

 

and her body guard, a tough looking

white man, with a hard face and eyes

 

that could skewer you in a second 

I try my South Carolina nod on him

but he does not respond

 

outside, the birds are crying

and another invisible train

 

blasts through town

 

Back in the room

Linda is sleeping and I fire up

 

the computer to write this poem

I can't get Mitt Romney's words

 

out of my mind: "I am not worried

about the very poor"

 

Really, Governor?

I am worried about

 all of us...America

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Ooo sounds so bleak and sad. When even the Walmart is gone. Yikes. Good visuals.
You brought their pain with you, Patrick, and that's more than many are willing to do. Much feeling in this.
So many people seem to be suffering these days. Makes me wonder.
Listening to the audio book, "The Help"...this relates. Powerful poem, Patrick.../r
"It's gonna be a long night in Lake City." Lots of long nights for the people who are stuck there. When a WalMart pulls out you know things are going downhill. I'll echo zanelle: bleak and sad; you captured the atmosphere perfectly.
Legendary...for posterity.