Raw and beautifully captured.
Good to see you here, Pavanne. Happy holidays.

R♥

Thanks Fusun! Happy Holidays! :-)

Great read. I recall a moment like that.

She was laying there snoring Zzz's loud.

I look to see her drooling on the pillow.

teasing
I snooze
all alone

Art - I was at the gym doing yoga on the floor ;-)

Huh. Where is this Netherlands Yoga Shop?

I took the train via fjords past the Arctic Circle.

The train jugged up and down hills and river creeks.

I loved that beautiful country. You ever visit Oslo?

I bet a dime that you attend the Symphony Opera.

It's great to know you were not slobbering. Oho.

I was traveling alone but sat next to your Mother?

She was beautiful and complained about my Snores.

I was too shy. WE went to Bouda (sp) and had Shrimp.

This is true. We traveled and saw the Midnight Son.

We shopped at a Farmer's Market and staid up too.

We sat at a campfire in the month of June. Honest.

WE never kissed. She saw a black beat and Scrammed!

We talked. Her brother went to Harvard Law School.

Jeannette A. I wonder? She lived in a guarded Apartment.

She lived directly across from Central Park. Not your Mom.

She was traveling alone. She drooled on a train. I snored.

I dream She comes to visit me in just a white bathrobe too.

I think I will join the YMCA and learn to cease and desist?

I'll learn to breath, snore, and find a woman who do Yoga.

This is so deeply revealing and moving. Felt the tug within the well placed words.

mmm. I hate those moments, they tear my heart in two. Vivid, your words, I saw this scene.
Enjoyed this P.

Reading this, I remembered your style: beautiful! Happy Holidays, Pavanne. R

Really excellent, Pavanne.

a tender portrait.

Thank you everyone for your kind comments! sorry I can't hang around - catching a plane in a few hours and still not packed. Happy Holidays! xp

So happy that I did not choose to "pass over" this assembly of words

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Thanks Algis! :-)

hello,

lovely, and the words arranged like a yoga stretch... !

Inverted Interrobang: Thanks! (I'm afraid most of my poems look stretchy - not sure why - they just come out that way. Perhaps it IS the yoga!) :-)