Pavanne Veltman

Pavanne Veltman
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Apeldoorn, Netherlands
Birthday
October 08
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Dreamer, creator, diplomat, procrastinator, hopeless romantic https://twitter.com/PavanneWrites

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MAY 25, 2012 6:40PM

Dimple

Rate: 3 Flag

 

Sometimes
I wonder
if the stars
gazing out
over the night sky
are equally taken
with our beauty
delighted
by our light
and do they
connect the dots
draw pictures
in the heavens
using us
as a dimple
on the cheek
of some fair goddess

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Oh! Exquisite work! It's so good to read your work again here! You were one of the first people I connected with here on OS 2 1/2 years back, remember?
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Poor Woman
May 25, 2012 06:51 PM
Oh, I certainly hope so! What a lovely thought. r
hilarad
May 25, 2012 07:10 PM
I love the image of being a "dimple on the cheek of some fair goddess."
Lovely poem
rated with love
RomanticPoetess
May 25, 2012 07:48 PM
Awwwww! Beautiful, Pavanne. R
Thoth
May 25, 2012 11:52 PM
Poor Woman: Hi! Yes I remember. Don't have a lot of time to write these days, which I hate! Glad you like my poem :-)

hilarad - thanks!

RomanticPoetess: me too! :-)

Thoth: :-)
Pavanne Veltman
May 26, 2012 04:47 AM