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RavingBits
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Not a professional writer, not really a professional anything. Currently making a living as an adult education instructor, and trying my best as a friend, a daughter, a sister, and a person.

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MAY 28, 2009 12:47PM

Dirty Poetry Thursday: Cinquain Edition.

Rate: 9 Flag

Feels like I'm always the one makin the first move on my lover lately, so, this one is for him...  

First to arch my back to say I want it,
First to slide my fingers under these clothes,
First to mount you and grind and grin,
First to grip you from deep within.
Me first; oh God, yes, please, to curl these toes.

 

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no, really, i didn't forget to breathe...
Verbal Remedy AKA Denise
May 28, 2009 12:50 PM
Toe curling fun! Rolicking great cinquain!!!
Cathy GF
May 28, 2009 02:42 PM
*blush* thanks, everyone!!

JK, I haven't heard that one... should I even ask?
RavingBits
May 28, 2009 03:53 PM
Very nice, I didn't know you were an organ grinder...
mr e
May 28, 2009 07:26 PM
Yes, yes, yes, I say yes!
Shivaun Nestor
May 29, 2009 12:49 AM