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Risa Denenberg

Risa Denenberg
Location
Seattle, Washington, USA
Birthday
February 25
Company
Smart Girls Ink
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I also blog about end-of-life issues at http://risaden.blogspot.com/

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JUNE 12, 2010 7:13PM

My father loved to spend money

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 My father loved to spend money,

to buy late-model Chevrolets, tell off-color jokes,

tease children, slap men on the back. He loved to dance,
to guffaw, to pick up the check, even broke. 

As a young man he inhaled asbestos
in the shipyards, went to war, returned,
ran a corner grocery. He was a city boy
who could tell a good melon by its thump
and believed that corn should not be shucked
until the water was boiling. 

Often laid off, he loved to fix
things around the house, screen doors
shelves, peeling wallpaper.  Or fix
himself a highball, sit in his chair
tie askew, with the Evening Star
and a handful of peanuts, as if
he had just come home from the office. 

My father didn’t finish high school
didn’t become an architect
didn’t take his medicine
didn’t stop smoking. He died
at 60, the age I turn today. 


 

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Oh my, Risa. i was reading along, nodding my head, relating. Then your last stanza hit like a ton of bricks. The relation between "he didn't become an architect, he didn't take his medecine". Sad but so powerfully told. I know today's not your Birthday but I know you've made it beyond 60 (as have I)
fine tribute for the father's day season
Stunning, really._r
Beautiful. I'll be shocked if this doesn't show up on the cover come Father's Day.
Good stuff. Packs a wallop.
so satisfying to read your work here, risa. your work shares the way you have a finger on the pulse.
Oh gosh. I was reading along and getting a wonderful picture of your father and then your last two lines hit me in the gut. I can feel your missing him and his ability to grab the gusto. He was successful at many things, the kinds of successes that tend to go unrecognized. Sounds as if your father's whole life was a dance and you've written a wonderful song of commemoration.
Your father sounds wonderful. The dancing way you describe him leading to that stark, drumbeat stanza....just beautifully written. I like your line breaks and the changing rhythms.