The Unexamined Life is Not Worth Living

Socrates
OCTOBER 30, 2010 6:32PM

Miles and I

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 Miles and I,  we slake the night

 full on shift to manual

slip to 80

Miles leans back and smiles

Miles is the tilt in my hips

Miles is agave , as it hits my feet

comes back up hot

Miles is the cold breaking wave on my head

 hair dripping

the last vestiges of clothes on sand

as I hit the night surf

Miles is the small bead of sweat

under my hair

unshaven chin rough against my neck 

dancing late into the night

Miles meets me at midnight

Miles and I

we are friends with the dark

 we take comfort in the shadow

 Miles leads me to country roads

 leans back

 gives me the go ahead signal

 turbo rising

speed and sex 

sweat and trumpet

Miles and I

we slake the night. 

 

 

 

 

 

 (Wikipedia, image)

 Miles is sex, sweat, speed, wind, surf and most of all night. Hope you get that from this. Lean back close your eyes and let it go.

 

  Miles Davis - Nuit sur les Champs-?lys?es [Take 2] .mp3    Found at bee mp3 search engine

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Absolutely fantastic, Rita! Fantastic. Of course Miles is all of that and even more.

Thank you. Excuse me now while I listen.
into the spam we swim, Miles and I...
Wow, you did that beautifully. There is only one Miles.~r
Yes SteveDos, I have a feeling you know a bit about the shadow..
Never a dull moment here. This time, you may incite my old feet to strike a rhythm on this living room rug. Lovely, poetic rita....
Rated
Miles! The first time I listened to "Bitches Brew" it changed my life, or at least the way I hear music, which is kind of the same thing.
Swept away with this Rita.
heh heh he- "into the spam we swim miles and I."

I kick myself for not making the time or effort to try to "get" miles and the great jazz artists. But, this slinky and slakey poem will do the trick.

Rated for super super slakiness!
Oh, man Miles is so worth the spam...r
Had he been born in Canada, his name might have been Kilometer.



{[R]}
"Slake the night" - perfect, that. 'Tis going in the chest. "Slip to 80" is deceptively easy to miss, but sends a tingle - 'twould make a great poem title, band name, metaphor for what often happens in life. "Miles is the small bead of sweat under my hair"... Your phrases are often powerful poems in themselves, sometimes Escher-like in their depth. Very much enjoyed...
Wow. He can just take you away any place he wants you to go. Magic!
Rita, I am caught up in a different place, right now, but I am reaching out to hold your hand.
mmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmm.
Gotcha, "slake"....satisfy, cool,
refresh,
combine (lime)
with water...

Never listened to him, alas. Got no concept of slaking,
which may explain me well...hm...

I guess i run frenetically in the Linguistic Night
seeking intensity and chance...
Listening now to
Dylan's "street legal" from 78...
a mad prophetic screech for salvation...

eg
"is yr love in vain"

"do you love me
or are you just extending good will..
do you need me half as much
as u say
or are u just feeeliing
illl..."


too much musical intensity over here, i guess,
i wish i could settle into
the cool fluid dark
you so
well
describe....
\

pantheistic polititicized ponderings
from a man who shouldnt lissen to too much

dylan..
Miles is there when we need him most. I have had nights in Miles'
many gifts.
rated for love
pw dull moment hope not..thank you
Nana no doubt a life changing thing when I heard Miles, he reached out and grabbed me. No doubt thanks Nana
MP: Thank you
Mission thanks Friend hope you felt some kind of cool
traveler: yes.
Fernsy slinky and slaky hmm hmm thanks
Hugs, isn't he, well worth it.. TY
VFox Well, I think you captured it all, knowing that you"got it" well appreciated and please give me further insight... regards
I've got a very nice playlist of my favorite Miles when I'm out alone on a solo photo road trip. Nothing beats having Miles loud when the horizon is at infinity and there's not another soul around.

Thanks for this.
As soon as i saw the title I hoped this was about Miles Davis. Amazing musician touted by an amazing poet!
Miles is sublime. Y0ur writing does him justice, though it's disturbingly non-Stygian.
Too cool. To me , Miles is San Francisco night views, the foghorns and the fire trucks going down Stanyan Street.
BBD horizon at infinity yes and more, thanks so happy to see you here.
Trilogy well, of course it was Miles our best our deepest.. thank you
Drew so fucking glad it was not Stygian...
zuma that you think it's cool, well, I am so humbled, thank you Zuma princess pirate woman...
Mr shine: just push the button and listen, just do it. Miles will take you there, surprised you never listened but just go there. hey, what's to lose Miles is dark and lovely all the things you love...
Move over Miles, but leave the music on ...
Get it. Got it. SO GOOD! Thanks again, Rita! whew!
this brought memories
I met Miles in college, a friend who knew a lot more than I did introduced us
maybe I should start listening again
Absolutely superb! Rita, I gotta start pouring myself a glass of wine before I read your post.
Miles is all that , a bag of chips and the dip too.
Kim slide over yeah

PM with thanks
vanessa; college I guess don' really know that but just close your eyes and listen..
Fay: bag of chips and all, yeah Miles and lt all lose..
Stunning in power and imagery. "we are friends in the dark", grand writing.
Rated.
Scylla we know night we know don't we? TY and take my hand we will walk forward into it all.
agave , as it hits my feet/comes back up hot~
under water under the night understood
hell, yeah, rita.
Catch: hell yes hell to the fire to Miles...
best sex evah, is always to miles
I have loved Miles Davis for years. He touches my soul like no other. Beautiful. And, yes - Miles, wine and beautiful sex.........Magic!!
This is really quite good. From what I've read so far, you've written some exceptional pieces. I'm a new fan... :-)
D: thanks for the knowing bout Miles
RA magic, black magic..
John welcome come back whenever, thank you..
Ah, Miles. What an apt and powerful tribute. Thank you - I'm off to grab some vinyl, and perhaps some wine, now...
You're good lass! Very very good!
I'm loving this music here at 1:37 A.M. as I read on. Great poem.
RITA
You are something very special, your poems and THE GREAT MUSIC you put for us to enjoy and feel your words in a dim light are just OUT OF THIS world.
thank you
Don't care much about jazz, but even I know Miles was among the best and most innovative musicians ever. Cool tribute, Rita. Or maybe that should be "hot" tribute....
Miles played between the notes, and you write between the words.
"slake the night" ... so so cool! as any poem for miles should be.
Rita, Sultry stuff. Slake ... is the perfect word to choose here. Your poems rocks -- or is that -- slides. You guys have a good one ...

@ Larry: Ha!
O Rita, this is the goooooood stuff!!!

i'm all smiles. that's what appreciation and recognition does. and a friend said the best stuff is when you get that pair.
I left a comment on this yesterday and for some reason it doesn't seem to have registered. I wanted to say, this is absolutely gorgeous. It makes me think of Miles' style. But at the same time, I have to confess, I like what you do a lot better than what he does. R!
Whew. My favorite thing you've ever posted here.

Real good.
Rex, hope you did and it was good..
Lass, hmm thanks WW
OB appreciate you coming by thanks
schloopie, thanks and glad you listened
Simonede what a nice comment, thank you,it's a good feeling to be understood..
BoanargesR:thank you for your steady readership, appreciated
aim, between the words, thank you a nice way of putting it
lorianne sometimes a word just comes to you, ya know.. thank you n ice to see you again.
Thanks Scarlett...
Renatta hey you're here, have to check out see what you are doing..
Alyssa that you came by twice, thank you..
D'art feels good to see you on my page again, thank you Duanne
Thank you Scupper for thinking so...
Forgot a few friends there, Scanner, Femme and anna1.. thanks for reading and for your good thoughts.. hands across the miles no pun intended.
Zowie - burning hot and cool.

Miles really is "most of all night."
Thanks for bringing Miles over here...
in here...acquiring the taste
thanks C&V
Mr Shine, yes.... a convert to the order.... play on..
This has to be my favorite of yours--sexy and strong. rated!
Your bring back many memories for me from his Out of the Blue ? LP. Thanks so much for sharing this.
Glad you listened again Algis, I thank you for coming by, always feel lucky to see you on my pages...
I was sure I had commented on this and I must have been so overcome I didn't. While I adore everything you write, this just was OVER the top.. it was sexy and soft and breeze in the face and absolutely amazing!
how nice Cindy! thank you for coming by and for sending me such a nice note.. I appreciate you!
Mmm, lushly lascivious... RRR
thanks for thinking so Patrick...
I missed this one.....perfect.
Is it strange I miss road trips so badly I'm somehow diminished being still?
Just Thinking, thank you for coming by. It's funny how sometimes we get on the road and feel even lonelier and can't wait to get home. Sometimes in just in the thought of going.. TY
*it is just in the thought of going...
Thanks Stellaa,, thought you might enjoy it, glad you did..
Dunno how in hell I missed this one. Even had I been in hell at the time, Miles woulda lured me out. Your surgically precise words here, perfectly toned, sure as hell lured out some marvelous comments too.
Thanks Matt! Miles is a pretty good equalizer..
Wow, I just discovered this Rita and it's brilliant. I can hear Miles as I read it.
Thank you Beckalim, appreciate your reading.
Rita, I don't know how I missed this one before!

Miles and I, we slake the night...

Miles leads me to country roads
leans back
gives me the go ahead signal
turbo rising
red wine and sex
sweat and trumpet
Miles and I
we slake the night.


Wow Rita! Absolutely WOW!

I envy you your poetic prowess ... I truly do!

And CONGRATULATIONS on the this being selected one of OS's finest for 2010! So very well deserved, my friend ... ABSOLUTELY!
This is one of the most beautiful poems I have read, and it tells the story of a beautiful man. So happy it was recognized on the cover.
Congrats on this fabulous poem being selected as one of the OS best of 2010. It's a fantastic poem - love it. R
Thanks Lil Kate, you are a huge encouragement to many here.
RomanticPoet: thank you love your new avatar..
Rita thank you for taking the time to come by and read... you also.
I dig this rita.

Miles gives you mileage.
Sex energy and music
The mechanical revving of notes.
That horn transporting the body
into the sweat of ecstasy.

Very cool poem with a good
engine that drives it along.

eric
I love this. It reads like Miles sounds. Very good.
Hi Eric, mileage out of Miles.... yes. Especially top down wind in my hair blaring trumpet, I just look over and he's riding shotgun. Now, hope I don't see any lights in my rearview. Thanks for the read.
Cleverly, I accept your compliment but I think we have to admit, no one does anything quite like Miles.. thank you and welcome here. Enjoyed your work yesterday.
I missed this the first time around. ... Crazy outstanding good. ... the poem, the song, and the woman. R.
How utterly cool! I hadn't discovered you yet on that date. I had only been on OS a couple of weeks. I love this one. But, hell, let's be honest. I love ALL of your poems.

Lezlie
'Miles and I', such sublime, serene truth, the way blood mushrooms right behind your eyes. Seeing anew, pulsations inhaled -- understood.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Thanks so much Deborah, so glad you enjoyed the poem and for coming back to read!
Hi Lez, that was kind to come back and happy to see this poem commented on still.
Roberto, as I wrote on another poem, knowing you are reading my poems in your lovely place in Italy is a real kick! TY
I was searching for this poem.
I'm so glad you kept it up. Just what I needed.
The music and words are the perfect sensual combination. One of my favourite poems you have written.
Miss 'seeing' ya, Rita. xo