The second in my poetry series...from our own Rita Shibr...beautiful verses about fly fishing.
And a shout out to my friends at Chictopia! What I'm wearing: Black wool flat front trousers from Eddie Bauer, vintage black chiffon blouse, vintage tie...xox
Fly Fishing Big Sky Country
I first saw you,
lightly adjusting your line
in the evening
over the cool green grass
Your wrist, fluid
lightening in slow motion
line unfurling, a long flag
a frog's tongue
and then snap
Again and over
for hours, stance
as still as stone
only your graceful
unfurl and snap
Ramshackle car at dawn
rumbling into the canyon
in pungent rubber waders
we traversed
the craggy cliffs
I followed silent your exuberance
your light and steady step,
til standing cold and breathless
knee high in rushing waters
Jagged stones and slippery moss
eagles sounding sentry
frightened and alive
I cast an unsteady
and wobbling line
Bits of wire and tiny net
shaped by nimble fingers
created a perfect nymphic foil,
weighted for our catch
Late into the evening
legs limp and shaking still
From my distant cabin
I heard your line unfurling
again, and then over
above the cricket sounds.
-Rita Shibr


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rated with mega hugs and for the outfit too!!
I've already added this to "opensaloon.org".
Lezlie
rita shibr & Robin Sneed/Woo!
a red breast Robin & Warblers!
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apology?
I need to calm down.
how you chill?
You arouse hillbilly!
sorry.
I go astrays.
But, no bad.
Woo wow ay.
♥R
Farmers planted 26- flats.
Flats held 10,000 shallots.
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I thought of Alan Watts`
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The Angler Fisherman.
He made his own flies.
He fished in calm creeks.
We best be calm lovers.
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I went astray on last post.
It's normal.
flow with ebb.
ride with tides.
I best visit peeps.
They peep happily.
Peeps in water wee.
Wee wow peep pee.
Entertain. Good day.
Rest and sweet dream.
(*You are a cutie-pie though!*) ;-)
.
late at night
women here
sit in the moonlight
sheer beauties
we make our own flies
feathers and beads
cast and draw
sweet meat
of the
catfish
xox
do i see more of these?
your reading adds soul
-R-
I think Rei Momo is right--hearing a poem read is so much more than reading it silently from the page.
rated.
great idea this!
i read my own work on public venues often and it would be cool to hear someone else do it.
Love the poem- Rita is a wonderful and amazing poet. Love the setting on this video a little better than the first one, more relaxed and at ease. Your outfit is fabulous.. Love and Hugs to you
R
I have always, always said, Robin, that you cannot go wrong with basic black. When in doubt go with basic black. You have proved my point here.
great poem.
a sufeit of pleasure.
great poem.
a sufeit of pleasure.
Meow! ;D
Once I get breath back.